Comments | suburban_boho: I Saw Her Standing There Chapter 10/10

suburban_boho

I Saw Her Standing There Chapter 10/10

Jul 13, 2014 15:51

And we've reached the end! I'm both sad to see this one end but also pleased that it's complete! I've loved writing it and shaping these dual worlds and making them both important to the narrative. It's been a thrill to write. And thank you to jonesingjay and mollybeakers for being my constant readers and commenters ( Read more... )

chapter10, i saw her standing there, maureen/alice (female oc)

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mollybeakers July 13 2014, 22:40:38 UTC

Um. HP sauce is available in the States. But... it's completely possible that the English stuff is different, as Europe has all kinds of goofy food restrictions. I'm still not done being freaked out that I can't get Diet Mt. Dew with tasty American brominated veg oil poison in it when I'm in England. *huffs* I smoke. Who gives a shit about bromine ( ... )

jonesingjay July 13 2014, 23:32:51 UTC

You drink Diet Mt. Dew?

mollybeakers July 13 2014, 23:40:43 UTC

Yes?

jonesingjay July 13 2014, 23:41:39 UTC

We're going to detox you! LOL.

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jonesingjay July 13 2014, 23:41:15 UTC

Even though I know Alice and Maureen's story could only end one way it was still a well written moment when Alice learned of Maureen's death. A brief blurb on the evening news, and a footnote in rock n' roll history connected to Ringo Starr of The Beatles ( ... )

suburban_boho July 14 2014, 01:28:27 UTC

Thank you so much for your kind words ( ... )