Okay! I have been meaning to do this but also putting it off because I know there's a lot I could do to write my characters better but I am also like OH GOD WHAT IF THEY HATE ME AND JUST WANT ME TO DROP OH GOD
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I wouldn't have noticed it was your first RP until you said it! You play very well and have often admired your writing. Do not fear, you are doing exceptionally well!
Yumichika is one of my favorites of yours. You play him very well, especially the inclusion of "beautiful" into everything. Shunsui is well done in his flirtatious and lethargic nature. Shalice = straight up win. One of my favorite muses in the entire RP! Quistis would be the most conflictive muse for me. I've played through FF8 and have some experience with Quistis. She seems to be more of a character to take hold of situations. You do that well with her relationship to Ikkaku as well as other personal matters, but I think you could probably play on it maybe just an itsy bitsy bit more. Otherwise, she's fine and dandy.
I am glad to hear that about Yumichika and Shunsui, I often feel like I'm not doing them justice. I'm planning some things to get Shunsui out and about a bit more. I'm also glad you like Shalice! She's a blast for me, and the easiest for me to write. I have a lot of fun with her. You're right about Quistis. I'm in the process of re-playing FF8 so I can get a better hold on her, but I think she is in need of a confidence boost here. I'm going to be throwing her into a few logs coming up soon to try to get her out of her emotionally awkward phase so she can become the kickass Quistis we know and love.
Shalice just has to be mentioned. She is from a really obscure fandom, but I think that she is a really great muse to have in the RP. She is a lot of fun for people to react off of and she is just very refreshing in terms of what one would expect from a faculty member, especially the Divinations professor. It is cool to see her getting a chance to thread with more characters and I think she has a lot of potential for really interesting things.
Shunsui is perfect. Totally spot on and you have his interaction with Nanao down brilliantly. I love reading you logs with them, although it'd be great to see him out and about more.
Yumichika just... just. Hilarious. I think you've actually kept him very well balanced and IC, and he works very well in the RP. I would love to see what sort of madness he'll incite in the future
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I think the only problem is that we need to plat together. I really need to get better at interacting with different characters...
Anyway, I LOVE how Yumichika reacted to seeing Toph! I can see then getting in a fight, and it would be AWESOME. Anyway, I like all of your characters, and I hope we can RP more.
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Yumichika is one of my favorites of yours. You play him very well, especially the inclusion of "beautiful" into everything. Shunsui is well done in his flirtatious and lethargic nature. Shalice = straight up win. One of my favorite muses in the entire RP! Quistis would be the most conflictive muse for me. I've played through FF8 and have some experience with Quistis. She seems to be more of a character to take hold of situations. You do that well with her relationship to Ikkaku as well as other personal matters, but I think you could probably play on it maybe just an itsy bitsy bit more. Otherwise, she's fine and dandy.
You're doing great!!!
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I am glad to hear that about Yumichika and Shunsui, I often feel like I'm not doing them justice. I'm planning some things to get Shunsui out and about a bit more. I'm also glad you like Shalice! She's a blast for me, and the easiest for me to write. I have a lot of fun with her. You're right about Quistis. I'm in the process of re-playing FF8 so I can get a better hold on her, but I think she is in need of a confidence boost here. I'm going to be throwing her into a few logs coming up soon to try to get her out of her emotionally awkward phase so she can become the kickass Quistis we know and love.
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Shunsui is perfect. Totally spot on and you have his interaction with Nanao down brilliantly. I love reading you logs with them, although it'd be great to see him out and about more.
Yumichika just... just. Hilarious. I think you've actually kept him very well balanced and IC, and he works very well in the RP. I would love to see what sort of madness he'll incite in the future ( ... )
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It is always awesome to be validated! :D :D :D
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Your Chalice is clearly the love-knot that holds the RP together (XD just saw that on Bella's journal)
It was fun logging with Quistis on the stucktogether day! Perhaps we coudl do something like that again.
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That was the most amazing thing ever. And, I kind of ship her with all of them too. >.>
We should! I need to get Quistis out and about more, and start getting her developed to the awesomeness she is in FFVIII.
(She forgives you for the misspelling. As long as you don't pronounce Shalice like Chalice but with an S.)
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Anyway, I LOVE how Yumichika reacted to seeing Toph! I can see then getting in a fight, and it would be AWESOME. Anyway, I like all of your characters, and I hope we can RP more.
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