Comments | suckerforjesse: Captain Lacey And The Borbanx Space Crew

suckerforjesse

Captain Lacey And The Borbanx Space Crew

Apr 25, 2005 09:52

Am I just really strange for carrying on a competition idea? I know, I know... I'm killing it. The usual person who checks my stuff hasn't been online for a loooong time- so I'm sorry it's not as funny as it can be. The next one will be though- promise... although the amount of people that actually read my stuff is estimated at about 2 people who ( Read more... )

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love_torock April 26 2005, 07:20:23 UTC

Okay, I don't know but that wasn't as confusing the second time round and it really was kind of funny because 'Lazzara' squealing girlishly while being thrown around a spaceship is just... amusing. The fact Jesse's a stuck-up, snobby, conceited asshole is also endlessly great, because he is and I love it. I thought this was original and it's great that you tried something like this... sci-fi is just, hmm, it's fun when done properly.

There were a few spelling and grammar mistakes, but I didn't really take note of them because I just don't unless it's overwhelming. I really have no idea what to say now, I suck at commenting/reviewing and why did you stop there? Why?! And peesh, was the other pretty boy John...?

suckerforjesse April 27 2005, 06:57:50 UTC

You read the first one? **Is confused- goes through archives** And you didn't note me! I am horrified!
Is this kind of confusing? How do I make it less confusing? Less neologisms?
And when you say spelling errors (My pet hate, I can't believe I'm doing it) do you mean when I put an S instead of a Z because I'm English? Or is it because I put a there instead of a their or what? Is my grammar that bad?
Oh and pretty boy John... I have plans for him.
I've probably already noted you back (I have a vague recollection) but I have no idea where.
Thanks for your note, even if you probably won't read this reply.

love_torock April 27 2005, 07:21:47 UTC

... I'm sorry, I didn't realise there was a first one.

As for confusing that may be why, or I must just be a little slow on the uptake of things and don't keep up with the words you use. Oh and spelling and grammar errors? TINY, I'm being pedantic. I think you said 'thee' and it was either meant to be 'the' or 'there', but I'm really not one to point that out.

I also use the beloved S instead of the Z, I'm Australian and love you for spelling the same way. ^_^
And I did read your comment and am writing one back, you're wrong dear and you're welcome.