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[whistleaway]

Title: Shame

Chapter: 8-9

Pairing: Bandcest eventually.

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Comments

[crawling_angel]

I'd already read the first bits...but the bit in the bar was just amazing. :) I adored the how you described the bruising on Brian's arm. *wonders if Steve should kiss it better*

[whistleaway]

*loves you*
Heh, not yet for meh Stevie... but maybe later
*rubs hands*

[crawling_angel]

*eyebrow waggle*
Any Brewitt I can get is appreciated muchly ;)

[whistleaway]

Brewitt owns my ass.

[bitexmarks]

That was nice, all the POVs were great :)

But what I loved the most was from here And Brian. Brian he was looking fixedly at his glass, his eyes shining with cling film tears that threaded to pour over. His hands trembled like hands do when things like these happen. to the end, if the rest of your story is cake then this is the icing, the filling and the cherry!
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[whistleaway]

I feel that I have to say the cling film thing was from Fight Club, so I might be a little less amazing.
But thanks.