chez le dentist (je te hais)

[suckmykissss]

when my mother carried me in her belly, we shared a mouth. her hunger was my hunger and we craved wet, dense poundcake together. the day i came out, i took her teeth with me. my mother's doctor informed her that she had 32 cavities shortly after, more cavities than she had teeth. my mother rose me to grow into my mouth, and after nineteen years, it

Comments

[catchatiger]

your mom must be one beautiful special woman to have a son like you who writes and thinks about mom when he's just getting his teeth checked. keep them healthy, i think i am pre-dispose to early onset gum disease that runs in my family. i never talk to the dentist-only the opometrist and not so much anymore ever since i got the laser procedure done right before i went off to college. dejavu everytime i read one of your illuminating creative writibg assignment entries. back to work-

[exeunt_]

poundcake love.
pourquoi la haine

i am completely random

[into_the_street]

gorgeous. your writing is breathtaking.

[binks]

this was beautiful to read

[rotrax]

I have never commented before, and perhaps it is too late now, for you are no longer here. but only now do I realize how much I enjoy reading your writing. where have you gone?