[fic] Stars

Aug 07, 2011 23:52

title : Stars (1/3) 
pairings : ohkura tadayoshi//yasuda shota (ohyass); ex shibutani subaru//yasuda shota (not in this chapter); probably more to come.
group : Kanjani8
rating : pg-13 (might go up, but don't expect porn)
warning : this chapter talks about suicide, it's absolutely not graphic, it's not one of the main characters, it's a few lines at ( Read more... )

kanjani8, pairing : ohkura tadayoshi/yasuda shota, rating : pg-13, genre : fanfiction

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shade_of_kim August 8 2011, 08:42:57 UTC
ooohhhhhh!!!
mem-ing this for later when im less busy :D

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shade_of_kim August 9 2011, 07:02:10 UTC
i love the background story in the beginning, i love the settings, i love the melancholy feel.... and somehow it kinda reminds me of supernatural lol.
will be waiting for next chapter!

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sucre_d0rge August 9 2011, 12:26:48 UTC
I've actually never watched supernatural (all i know about it is what I gathered from fandom_secrets

Thank you for commenting ~♥ will try to update as soon as possible^^

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carey_chan August 8 2011, 12:44:09 UTC
can`t wait for their first encounter ♥

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sucre_d0rge August 9 2011, 12:06:42 UTC
thank you very much for commenting ♥
their first encounter will happen very soon~

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superhappynao August 8 2011, 19:27:18 UTC
looking forward to the other chapters! I really enjoyed it; love the idea, love the atmosphere of the hotel and bar and the way that everyone kind of seems disheartened or empty... so something's bound to change that soon! The area reminds me of service stations on motorways, and they always seem like different worlds to me xD
Thanks so much for posting this, I will look out for the rest :3

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sucre_d0rge August 9 2011, 12:24:40 UTC
thank you for commenting ♥
actually the inspiration for this chapter and places were very various.
First, the scenes in the town all happen during the night, so the atmosphere is very different from what it will be during the day. I remember going to a motorway station at 3am not so long ago, and i was used to these places being always crowded and full of light, but at 3am, it was only me, my mom, the vendor and flickering lights.
The inspiration for the hotel comes from Kinugawa Onsen, which is some kind of deserted town. But in the fic, the interior proves otherwise. (ps : if you scroll down too much, some images are NSFW, not what I would call porn, but not something you'd like to see while at school/work)
As for the bar, the inspiration is taken from a live bar a friend took me to a few weeks ago, (though I exagerated it a lot ^^)

long reply was long

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superhappynao August 10 2011, 21:42:58 UTC
Thank you for replying in such detail! It's very interesting! And I believe it's best to write about scenes you've seen or got a vibe from, not to make something up from scratch (though of course, it can be done).
Thankyousomuch for the reply it shows just how much you put into what you do! :D (and yeah I see what you mean about the pictures xD curiosity got the better of me and now I regret it!)

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sucre_d0rge August 17 2011, 22:08:45 UTC
I prefer saying for the picture as I don't know where people are when they check picture (I wouldn't like to be seen looking at some of these pics at college/at work), plus I don't know the age of my readers.
You're very welcome~~~~ I like speaking too much XD

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nsa87 August 14 2011, 03:51:35 UTC
all the 6 were in it except for the last eito, wish he will make his appearance next :) this is interesting. good work xD

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sucre_d0rge August 17 2011, 22:04:13 UTC
Thank you so much for commenting ♥
Yes, Ryo does make his appearance in the next chapter^^

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