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Threadbare Gypsy Soul

Feb 23, 2007 17:59

Title: Threadbare Gypsy Soul (5/?)
Rating: NC-17 over all (PG-13 most chapters)
Pairing: Dom/Billy
Warnings: Sequel to BTS, AU, angst. In this universe, Dom is a NYC social worker. The nature of his work may be a touchy subject for some people ( Read more... )

au, bts!verse, threadbare gypsy soul, chapter works, monaboyd fic

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surreality_fan February 24 2007, 03:19:23 UTC

oh dear. it's like sadder. not as anxious. talk about a lot of baggage from a vacation. lol i really look forward future installments.

suede_scripture March 4 2007, 02:31:08 UTC

Thank you!

amygirl February 24 2007, 03:22:36 UTC

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Awww...poor messed up boys. *huggles* That last part with Dom saying "not being what you thought you wanted" put a huge lump in my throat. I don't normally cry for fanfic but that just about did me in.

I absolutely love how real you've made them. They live and breath and jump right off the page with all their colors and problems and everything else.

Anxious to see where this heads next, I'm sure they'll work it out eventually but I'm just as sure it won't be an easy road for them.

suede_scripture March 4 2007, 02:31:34 UTC

Thank you so much!

alassenya February 24 2007, 04:02:36 UTC

This is getting so much more complex - I really like it, especially with Sean's antagonism ... interesting.

suede_scripture March 4 2007, 02:31:54 UTC

Thanks!

crsty1961 February 24 2007, 04:26:04 UTC

Um wow this just gets sadder and sadder. I kinda wish you'd hurry up and post more so we can get back to them being happy, but I know it doesn't work that way. Also there may not be a happy comming, just like in real life. Thanks for another intreging chapter.

suede_scripture March 4 2007, 02:32:15 UTC

Thank you!

butterflyweb February 24 2007, 04:46:33 UTC

Man...*head in hands* I want to just hit Dom with something over and over until he backs off, because he's smothering Billy, and it doesn't matter if he doesn't care, because Billy does. But at the same time, I've been Dom and I probably still am Dom. Can't let it go, can't let it alone to heal by itself, have to push. *sighs*

Brilliant job, luv, once again. You have me so captured in this story. abandt is right, they are so real, and so well characterized, that I'm completely invested in them and it's just wonderful.

suede_scripture March 4 2007, 02:33:19 UTC

Yeah, Dom is at a complete loss for what to do, poor guy. Thank you!