Threadbare Gypsy Soul

Apr 02, 2007 20:51

Title: Threadbare Gypsy Soul (7/?)
Rating: NC-17 over all (PG-13 most chapters)
Pairing: Dom/Billy
Warnings: Sequel to BTS, AU, angst. In this universe, Dom is a NYC social worker. The nature of his work may be a touchy subject for some people ( Read more... )

au, bts!verse, threadbare gypsy soul, chapter works, monaboyd fic

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starlingthefool April 3 2007, 03:34:08 UTC
Ah. Gorgeous and heartbreaking.
Have I mentioned that you write the most amazing dialogue? It flows so well and easily, and makes your writing an abosolute joy to read.

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suede_scripture April 10 2007, 23:59:28 UTC
Thanks so much!

So, I have a secret. I read my dialogue out loud and with the appropriate (if butchered) accent. If it doesn't sound like they'd say it, I'll change it until it does.

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crsty1961 April 3 2007, 03:47:47 UTC
Awe **all teary eyed** That last bit was so sweet.
YAY they made up and now on to the healing. :D
Thanks for a great read. ♥

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suede_scripture April 11 2007, 00:00:08 UTC
Thank you, love.

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darkerbreed April 3 2007, 04:07:06 UTC
Gorgeous. *looks for kleenex* I especially adored your description of Billy as "that vulnerable strength. Like a tree in the path of an oncoming avalanche." and Dom as "a beautiful mess"

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suede_scripture April 11 2007, 00:00:27 UTC
Thank you!

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elouisa April 3 2007, 06:12:16 UTC
Such a lovely and heatbreakingly hopeful chapter.

sweeping through Dom’s mouth, laying a claim that Dom could never resist, that still sent a shiver through him.

Such a gorgeous description of a kiss.

Thank you for sharing this world once more with us.

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suede_scripture April 11 2007, 00:00:50 UTC
Thank you!

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lhazzie April 3 2007, 09:05:19 UTC
"I don’t know how to fix this."

Ah Dom, the hardest question of all.

...lucky bastard for working it out tho.

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suede_scripture April 11 2007, 00:01:14 UTC
Thanks!

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