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Threadbare Gypsy Soul

Jul 09, 2008 22:25

Title: Threadbare Gypsy Soul (14/?)
Rating: NC-17 over all (PG-13 most chapters)
Pairing: Dom/Billy
Warnings: Sequel to BTS, AU, angst. In this universe, Dom is a NYC social worker. The nature of his work may be a touchy subject for some people ( Read more... )

au, bts!verse, threadbare gypsy soul, chapter works, monaboyd fic

Comments 25

glass_moment July 10 2008, 04:51:31 UTC

...oh, god.

I typed the above and then just sat here for a few minutes, trying for coherence. This fic feels like such a fight, striving for the tiniest bit of hope and progress and all crashing down again. Painfully real. I really must go back and reread the entire thing, and probably BTS also, so I have the context for all of it fresher in my mind.

P.S. I absolutely adore the last line of this chapter. The wording of it is gorgeous and perfect and *handwave of englishfail*.

suede_scripture July 12 2008, 01:34:56 UTC

Thank you, Scribe. It has been a fight, trying to decide what to do with this.

alassenya July 10 2008, 08:12:03 UTC

Thank you for this - I am keeping my fingers crossedthat it will all work out well for them in the end.

(And I can certainly sympathise about being blocked!)

suede_scripture July 12 2008, 01:35:23 UTC

Thank you!

light_the_sky76 July 10 2008, 09:27:39 UTC

It always makes me really happy to see another chapter of this has been posted.

*gets comfy*

suede_scripture July 12 2008, 01:35:59 UTC

Thank you!

sam_i_am_89 July 10 2008, 10:39:55 UTC

I knew I was going to love this chapter because Ella was mentioned in the first two sentences. Then there was the 'home' thing and the hottest blow-job ever.

“Oh my god, just spread me out on a flat surface somewhere and you can have me." - Oh Billy, I thought you'd never ask! :D

And then Sean was calling and now I'm thrilled you posted, but really worried about the next part at the same time! Hopefully, Dom won't get into the same mindframe as after Shiloh and do lots of stupid things.

GAH!

*dies with anxiety*

xxxxxxxxxxxx

suede_scripture July 12 2008, 01:36:50 UTC

Thanks so much!

shelley6441 July 10 2008, 15:17:00 UTC

I feel tense when I read this, tho I love it so, so much. Poor Dom is still worried about Billy leaving, and worried about doing or saying something to make Billy angry, and worried about his kids. I hope Billy will stay forever, because Dommie needs and loves him so much.

Is Ryan the young man at the pizza place? I had a bad feeling the whole time Dom was talking with him. OMG....

*anxiously awaits part 15*

sam_i_am_89 July 10 2008, 20:14:12 UTC

Nope. Ryan is one of Dom's foster kids. Hence, why Sean said 'Don't Hurry', implying that Ryan is dead.... :( :( sooo sad.

suede_scripture July 12 2008, 01:41:19 UTC

Ryan is the sickly baby brother of Justin seen in the previous chapter. Ricardo is the young man at Angelo's. Both are (or were, in the latter's case since he's now of age) Dom and Sean's cases, but rest assured Ricardo will go to Columbia and become a doctor and live happily ever after. :)

Thank you so much!