A True Gentleman

Sep 18, 2012 12:46

Title: A True Gentleman (16/?)
Pairing: Dom/Billy
Rating: PG-NC17
Warnings: AU, angst, art geekery
Summary: Uni fic.

Chapter 16 )

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eff_reality September 18 2012, 20:00:06 UTC
The naked thigh nestled between Billy's legs drew slowly up and then back down as he shifted
It is still so ridiculous to me that we sort of know firsthand what this looks like.

Also, the whole beginning: GAHHHHH. You can't resist a warm, sleepy, kissy Dom, Billy. You can't possibly.

ALSO, WHITE SHIRT AND JEANS. This chapter is just for me, isn't it?

Dom bit his lip, rising from his side of the table and plucking the check from edge of it. He ruffled Billy's hair again, leaning down to kiss his temple before he went to the cash register to pay.
I sort of adore just how easily Dom has slipped into these silent bits of affection, like they're already in a relationship in his head. :D

And God, I love how Dom cannot stay away from him toward the end, that he needs the reassurance that it wasn't just a one time thing. I REALLY HOPE IT'S NOT, OKAY?

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suede_scripture September 25 2012, 00:06:41 UTC
Bwee thanks boo!!

This chapter is just for me, isn't it? Noes! That bit is for meeeee as well!!

eta: oops wrong account. lol

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rubyelf September 18 2012, 23:45:08 UTC
I pretty much fall out of my chair any time I see there's another part to this. ESPECIALLY after the last one.

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suede_scripture September 25 2012, 00:07:59 UTC
Aw, thanks! <3

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glass_moment September 20 2012, 23:32:09 UTC
Hooray for more of this! I'm so happy that they're, um, getting along now. :-P As ever I love the descriptions of art in this fic. The tea and salt thing is fascinating, and the glimpse of Dom's sketchbook is just perfect. I sense trouble ahead at commencement, though...

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suede_scripture September 25 2012, 00:08:43 UTC
lol Yes, they are. Thanks dahlink!

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msilverstar September 24 2012, 02:54:09 UTC
Ahhhh, this is wonderful: Billy unfurling a little, Dom showing his talent, they're so good together.

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suede_scripture September 25 2012, 00:09:00 UTC
Thanks so much!

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babydazzle September 26 2012, 03:02:23 UTC
suede_scripture September 26 2012, 03:56:33 UTC
Oh, me too. LOVE my erasers!! Obviously you can't be messy in drafting, but I have a lot of admiration for people who do the loose and messy sketchy thing well, and can sketch in pen or marker without fear, because I sure can't.

Thanks!

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