Mira or Jess. You.
shy_dramaqueen with some incestuous Jack for you.
Yesterday's sue has gained some constructive criticism, and three new chapters, but though the author thanks the reviewers, claims that there's almost a plot coming up and explains that she writes pointless chapters on purpose, I'm not reading another three angsty pieces.
TITLE: Where do I belong? Oh, poor ( Read more... )
Yesterday's sue has gained some constructive criticism, and three new chapters, but though the author thanks the reviewers, claims that there's almost a plot coming up and explains that she writes pointless chapters on purpose, I'm not reading another three angsty pieces.
TITLE: Where do I belong? Oh, poor ( Read more... )
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I'm thirteen!
Stupid 'Sue's giving the intelligent non-slutty thirteen year olds a bad name.
And how dare this author make Jack... that... thing.
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Does this girl have a disorder that causes her thumb to twitch, or does she just want to press on the space bar's smooth hardness?
“Bloody Pirate,” You whispered.
From this, I conclude that "You" is actually the name of the character. All the times it was not capitalized were simply more examples of bad grammar.
“NO! Turn around, Perv!”
Interestingly, You and Jack seem to have been joined by someone named Perv. I wonder why You chose that moment to begin speaking to him/her.
I don't think the author is thirteen - I think thirteen is the age she'd like to be. But maybe my judgment is clouded by the fact that I'm thirteen too, and I cannot bear the idea of sharing an age with someone who writes this horribly.
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I think the same thing about the age stuff. Whenever a particularly bad author claims to be the same age as me, I cringe and think it can't be possible, no one my age could be that stupid...
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It makes me wonder what these people are like in real life. Do they go around all day being like "What if Jack Sparrow was a perverted man who wanted to watch me change? ...I know! I'll write a fanfic!"
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It's a pity this is a You!fic. It would have been amusing to see Mira-or-Jess written out every few lines.
Of course, it's a pity it's a You!fic for more reasons than that, but that's a given.
Your hair reached your bum, WHY DID YOU HAVE TO LET IT GROW THAT LONG!?!?
IF YOU DON'T LIKE IT CUT IT OFF YOU FOOL!!!1!
Only Sues can angst about their hair being too long.
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I am rather disappointed though, that I had to receive such bad news about it.
She also "forgot" her character's age.
Oh and just asking...when did I say she was thirteen? I read my chappies over and it doesn't say anything about her age.
And then her reviewers pointed her to the summary... so she changed it.
A 16 yr old girl named Mira or Jess is constantly beeing beaten by her parents. Her life sucks. But when she is taken back in time, will she finally find out where she belongs? Will she find true love? JackYou
Way to backpedal, sweetie.
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Sorry to nitpick, most beloved shy_dramaqueen, but I think the word you're looking for is "pedophiliac", not incestuous. It would be incestuous if the Sue is related to Jack, but if she is, I missed that reference.
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