LJ Idol Week 39: Gambler's Fallacy

Feb 25, 2015 21:47

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He cupped her face in his hand with as much softness as he could, so not to wake her. He nestled closer, matching her breath. She sighed and rolled toward him and his fingers got lost in her hair. This, he thought. This momentThe world was young; Earth's dirt so new it was all moist and dark. Plants and men grew together in wonder, worshiping ( Read more... )

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jexia February 27 2015, 02:59:30 UTC
I think this is my favourite piece of yours.

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suesniffsglue February 28 2015, 19:03:11 UTC
Thank you so much!

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gratefuladdict February 27 2015, 03:44:05 UTC
This was exquisite.

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suesniffsglue February 28 2015, 19:03:19 UTC
Thank you kindly :)

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murielle February 27 2015, 06:43:28 UTC
You made me cry. So,so sweet.

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suesniffsglue February 28 2015, 19:03:32 UTC
I'm sorry that I'm happy for making you cry, but I am!

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karmasoup February 27 2015, 23:57:47 UTC
There's always a chance. *Sweet sigh*

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suesniffsglue February 28 2015, 19:04:13 UTC
:) Always is!

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bleodswean February 28 2015, 00:05:25 UTC
This was sad and joyful. I love how much time he traveled through!

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suesniffsglue February 28 2015, 19:04:40 UTC
Thank you! I really wanted it to span a lot of time. It was hard to do with not much time but I'm glad it worked out!

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