LJ Idol Week 1: I Need the Struggle to Feel Alive

Nov 23, 2016 15:06

I Need the Struggle to Feel AliveTucked very neatly in the center of the woods was an impossibly small home that housed an impossibly large amount of space on the inside. Truly, the hag and the cat did not even need the space available and spent most of their time in the kitchen, all wood and herb and warm hearth. The home was impossibly small ( Read more... )

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lilmissmagic71 November 24 2016, 07:21:59 UTC
OOOOOO. Dig it. Nicely done!

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marlawentmad November 25 2016, 20:03:45 UTC
I wish there was a way I could teleport into your creative brain and vacation there a while.

I love this story so much; it has all of my favorite elements.

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karmasoup November 26 2016, 04:29:29 UTC
Very nice. I imagine if you're immortal, you would have to do things to entertain yourself, stave off the boredom of monotony. Good thing she gave herself an immortal pet, too, otherwise, it could get pretty lonely. But I do love the mischievous nature! ;)

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l0retta November 26 2016, 14:14:28 UTC
I love it!

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rayaso November 26 2016, 16:27:40 UTC
So wonderful, and so well written! I loved this. There were many great phrases, including "gorging herself on delicious moments of stripped humanity." I loved the idea of the amorphous house.

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