LJ Idol Week 2: Living Rent-Free in Your Head

[suesniffsglue]

A Tale of Caution

I’ll grant you a moment to assay the ill-condition of my anatomy

Comments

[karmasoup]

She is one hot mess - She should come with a warning label!

[d0gs]

The description here is fantastic. Awesome work :D

[halfshellvenus]

I loved the poem at the end, which summed up the whole feeling of this story deliciously and yet concisely.

It is hard to forego longing, once you've felt its pull, and I can see someone becoming addicted to it to the exclusion of all else.

[alycewilson]

Lyrical and moving.