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jatnj October 13 2006, 21:23:45 UTC
Aw. That was sweet.

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freedom 3 anonymous October 14 2006, 00:06:19 UTC
I love how you show Apollo and Starbuck in the air. I could visualize every thing they did. I liked the early banter about her not calling him sir, it was so them.

This is so sad--To ignore her fuel light and just keep flying, away from the fleet until her engines failed and it was just her and her viper alone with the stars. Nothing else. Nothing to hurt her or trouble her, ever again.
Then when she returns and doesn't want to get out of her Viper. She wants to savor the experience of flying again, and more than that, flying with Lee again. And he can see it in her face.

I am really intersted on what your take is as to what happened between the two of them. You've really captured Kara well here.

Great job!!!

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etilia76 October 15 2006, 11:06:19 UTC
Finally! My two favourite pilots in the air again - and I think Lee loves to hear his old call sign again instead of commander or sir :D. I hope we will get to see this is canon again -soon :)

I really really loved this chapter :D

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nytel December 16 2006, 19:43:01 UTC
I'm still continuing to enjoy the re-read. :)

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mlsky January 27 2007, 20:25:16 UTC
Ah...excellent chapter. Nicely balanced with the flying and the feelings. Great description also...

Lovely work.

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