Rain to Snow ch. 3 prompt.

[sugah_magnolia]

Some time in the middle of the night, as the storm raged on outside and the heat stubbornly refused to work inside the room, JC instinctively moved closer to the soft body that was pressed against him for warmth. In the hazy area of not quite awake but not exactly asleep, he buried his face into the lightly scented, softest strands of silk he had

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Welll...you're half way there :D

[ravynmuse]

Some time in the middle of the night, as the storm raged on outside and the heat stubbornly refused to work inside the room, JC instinctively moved closer to the soft body that was pressed against him for warmth. In the hazy area of not quite awake but not exactly asleep, he buried his face into the lightly scented, softest strands of silk he had ever known.

Love this part.

Vaguely aware of a soft sound of pleasure, he chalked it up to the vision of a snow angel in his dream that was fighting to stay with him and lure him back into the blissful darkness of slumber. This snow angel was allowing him to hold her in his arms. They never let anyone touch, let alone hold them and he didn't want to give her up. She had big, blue eyes that sparkled and her lips were a perfect pink rosebud.

This part, however, is a bit too flowery for my tastes...Maybe since she's the source of warmth, she's a sun goddess instead of a snow angel?

Sorry!

[ravynmuse]

Sorry! Was at school and got kicked offline. Class is done anyway, so I'm on my way home. If you're still online in about an hour or so (probably less) then I'll talk to you then, otherwise I'll talk to you probably this weekend (have Astronomy tomorrow and have to actually pay attention to that!)