Confess your love (as well as your folly)

[sugangel7]

Title: Confess your love (as well as your folly)
Fandom: Fringe
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Peter/Olivia
Word Count: ~1650
Spoilers: Through “Concentrate and Ask Again.”
Summary: Post-“Marionette.” He lives in purgatory, with Heaven just out of reach.
Disclaimer: I don’t own the fabulous show that is Fringe or the beautiful song that is “White Blank

Comments

[mack_the_spoon]

Awww. Very good, sad and sweet.

[sugangel7]

Thank you so much. That was definitely the effect I was going for, so glad to hear it. :)

[namarie24]

This is vivid and excellent, and a beautifully painful exploration of Peter's thoughts during this time.

[sugangel7]

Thanks so much for leaving feedback. This is my first time doing Peter's POV so glad to hear you enjoyed it.

[melissa_pbfan]

I love this. I usually don't like reading Post-Marionnette/Pre-6B fics, but this was really well written. <3

[sugangel7]

Thanks so much for your lovely comment. So glad you enjoyed!

[sugangel7]

Thanks, babe. Means the world. :)

[lone_pyramid]

Oh wow, this is fantastic.

I really love that introductory scene, and all the emotion throughout the fic, Peter's happiness at having Olivia and his confusion over what happened and what to do and his desperation and wanting her but not being able to have her... and ultimately, redeeming himself at the end (because really, who didn't want to smack Peter during the first half of S3 for not noticing? But he makes up for it in the end).

Great work!

[sugangel7]

Thanks so much for the feedback! That introductory scene was the first thing that came to me after listening to that song. I'm glad all the emotions I wanted to convey came through, especially the sense of redemption at the end.