Chapter Nine : The Touch Of Her Hand

[sugarcomb]

[Be still my heart! It's pre-prom soap opera! Benedict woos Clara, but will Joanne realize his deceptive plans? The prom theme confuses some, disgusts a few and thrills others. And will the princess lose out to Tetris? ]

Comments

[bluedurian]

Woman, this is so vile!

And what's that BENJAMIN doing there ?!?!?!?!?

What kind of slip up was that?

No parallels!

[ioogleguys]

what is so vile about this chapter? personally, I think the last chapter was the most disgusting one... I don't think I can write anything like that anymore. this chapter was almost romantic. you have such a supposedly romantic relationship with clara..... sobsob... I must create a romantic storyline for Goldie as well... with a wonderfully loyal and handsome and dashingly charming guy. mwahahah.

oh, hahah... lazy to log in and change lah. I swear that there is no parallels! :P I'll leave it there and see if anyone else notices it...

[silverkey]

I noticed it when I first read it. Thought I'd log in and edit when i got the rest of the edits ready and also... heeheehee - I wanted to know if Ben would notice his name up there. *snicker*

[sugarcomb]

*blur look*

I din even notice it til leech told me...

That means not many ppl wil notice it! Hhahahaha

Chiau Ling (^-^)