Negligent

[sugaredviolet]

(Yes, I've been dead. But here's something I wrote for lit. Don't be too harsh, I went overboard on the similes. Why post it

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[watchyouburn]

i like this story,i never really liked the story of snow white...maybe i would like it now that i am older,but i didn't like it as a child.
however,i did like this story.the way you describe everything is awesome and i think you did an great job on the story.i think things such as "Her face was white as snow, her lips as red as blood, her hair as black as coal." really helped the story.
-Jagger

[sugaredviolet]

I only liked the movie because it was Disney...this was a writing prompt for lit by the way, but i made it much better for the final. Sorry for all the grammatical errors, that's what I get for typing late into the night. The working title for right now is "Flawless" but I like your rose idea.
-Roxanne

[watchyouburn]

i dont even remember the last time i watched a disney movie...the story turned out great,guess you got a good prompt.i didn't notice any grammatical errors but i may have missed them since i usually have lots in my stories.

[watchyouburn]

oh yes,forgot this,you said you had no title,right?i think it should have something to do with a rose,most likly a single rose,since only one seemed to glow at the end.