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[sugarfrosting]

Title: Secret
Pairing: Jaejoong/Yunho
Rating: PG-13
A/N: Five kisses through the years. Angsty. um. idek. I...can't seem to write happy!Jaeho D= Lyrics from Dashboard's Hands Down

Comments

[t_i_ra_mi_su]

Ouch. :'( I just don't know who to feel worse for; Yunho who is doing something he doesn't really want (for what?), or Jaejoong who is forced to sit back and watch it happen.

my heart is yours to fill or burst
...to break or bury, or wear as jewelry. I guess the continuation of that line didn't need saying out loud; it became pretty clear in the end.

Kudos! Heartbreaking and poignant and cleanly written. Sorry for the comment; I'm not really 100% coherent right now. ^^

omg

[vsaysoioioi]

i loved it!

The ending was sad and reading the last line "Our secret" Was beautiful.

[reveriepooh]

oooh??? Yunho got married?
*having a light heart attack.
but its beautiful. Sad. but a beauty nonetheless.

[virginangelic]

So heartbreaking yet so beautiful. <3 Great job! *adds to memories*

[kallistei]

:( Oh, Jaeho.

Lovely, in the heartbreaking way.