Melly

May 11, 2008 21:20

Tommy would sit at home and play computer games all day long. He would only wear sweat shorts because he liked the feeling of bare legs, but he also got cold easily. He was obsessed with the game, 'The Sims.' He would spend hours after school playing until dinner happened and then he would wait until dinner ended so he could spend more hours ( Read more... )

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koala_beah May 12 2008, 07:46:43 UTC
this is the most creeper story in the whole entire world and i love it. i love tommy. no, i love kimberly. but kimberly loves tommy who loves melly sue.

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sugarkane3 May 12 2008, 08:06:32 UTC
I didn't mean for it to be creepy actually haha but when I reread it I judged mahself

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koala_beah May 12 2008, 22:36:46 UTC
no but i really like it! it reminds me of those crazy stories that would be on like tales from the crypt or x-files or like twilight zone or something

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girlontheroof May 12 2008, 20:31:39 UTC
that is a pretty awesome, but admittedly very creepy, story. way to go dude!

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sugarkane3 May 15 2008, 00:02:38 UTC
thanks!! Also, we need to hang out. 2 years, mam? not alright. hitta sista up 6509968764

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___psychedelia May 12 2008, 20:55:21 UTC
I agree with the others; creepy! I like how it's written; flows real well.

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sugarkane3 May 15 2008, 00:02:55 UTC
thanks friendy y aryarrr!

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