Comments | sugarpromises: fic: when everything goes red.

sugarpromises

fic: when everything goes red.

Dec 20, 2010 23:13

Title: When Everything Goes Red
Author: sugarpromises
Fandom: General Hospital
Characters: Maxie Jones, Patrick Drake
Rating: PG 13
Prompt: Breakable
Timeline: Summer 2008. After Maxie sleeps with Spinelli the first time.
Word Count: 748
Summary: The sight of her clinging to the ground is unsettling, but he doesn’t dare disturb her state. He’s seen what shock ( Read more... )

projects: 12 days of xmas, community: theechochorus, tv: general hospital, fiction, character: maxie jones

Comments 3

lapiccolina December 21 2010, 04:30:34 UTC

Aww, this is very good.

I like the parallels that you draw with the guilt thing between Robin and Maxie.

I love that Patrick tried to help the best he could.

I love the ending when Maxie gives Patrick permission to call Robin.

This was very good.

luxken27 January 3 2011, 03:50:32 UTC

Ooh, I like this! Maxie is one of my favorite characters, and its rare to see her so completely vulnerable (or at least, *open* about it). I kinda like that the first person she "confesses" to is Patrick - somehow, its just what she needed =)

Nicely done!

sugarpromises January 3 2011, 19:14:35 UTC

Thanks! I thought the Maxie/Patrick dynamic would be interesting. They both love Robin and are connected by her, so I was really excited to write a scene with them together.