You Can Only Follow (Teaser. Part of Ch1)

[sugarsnapy]

Title: You Can Only Follow (Where Your Heart Leads)
Author: sugarsnapy
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Ryan/Seth
Summary: Wherein Seth unknowingly falls for Ryan as time goes by.
Disclaimer: These characters do not belong to me.
Author's Notes: There likely will be more parts to this. I want there to be more parts but inspiration strikes whenever it so pleases

Comments

[kairi_jaganshi]

YES! Please continue this! :DD Seth always amuses me, and you just captured his particular brand of humour perfectly. ♥ I immediately saw that when I read the first paragraph. :DD Seth does have a tendancy to name thing, "The ..." Like The Kirsten. xDD And I LOL'ed out loud when I read, "The Holy 'Moley." Hee. It was like we were inside Seth's head, not an easy thing to manage. ;D And it was so amusing. :DDD

The only thing I have a slight problem with is the first sentence:

Ponder…that’s like…a really fascinating word.

I don't know if it's just me, but it seems like something Summer would say. xDD; After I pondered about it the pun was unintentional, I swear I thought it might have been because of Summer's influence what with Seth hanging around her alot and all, but that was shot down when you later hinted this taking place during the first season. ^^;; So, uh, yeah. Just putting my two cents in. :D Other than that, I didn't catch any typos, errors, etc.

[sugarsnapy]

Umm..wow. Thank you very much. Tbqh, I wasn't expecting a reply to this little thing lol. (Srsly, what happened to the fandom?!) Thank you!

I think that the reason I was able to channel a bit of "Sethism" into the writing and development of his character was that, at the time this was written, I was pretty much watching an episode every day (Winter break 07/08 lol) and reading fic practically 24/7 lmfao.

Which also leads me to the Summer thing..hmm..I guess it does sound a lot like her (I didn't mean to though!) Umm..this will probably make it confusing to everyone, but I didn't really have a specific time period/season/whatev in mind...and I never watched every episode so it won't be canon-complaint.. :/

And yeah. This is getting so wordy, I apologize, but one last thing! OMFG! *points to yr icon* It's Jaejoong! Awesome!

[insanityxspeaks]

OH EM GEE I REALLY LIKE THIS SO FAR.
You have captured the essence of Seth Cohen brilliantly, love.
I'm super picky about that since he is my favorite character ever of any t.v. show, movie, etc. on the face of the planet. So good job. ;]
And continue. PLEASE. <3

[sugarsnapy]

LOL. Thank you very much!

But your most favorite character ever? Eek. Umm..writing him seems so much more intimidating all of a sudden lol. We'll see what happens but thank you for R&R'ing!

[insanityxspeaks]

You're very welcome!

LOL, I have full faith in you, sweetheart. I'm sure you'll do a fantastical job. Honestly, I'm just glad to see that this comm hasn't died yet, 'cause sometimes it seems barely a breath away from the grave. And that is very sad, very sad indeed. So keep writing, and I will keep R&R'ing! :]

[sugarsnapy]

Yeah. I know what you mean. It's like it's going through its death throes right now..:/

lol, death throes.

[ms_soma]

I think this is a really interesting start to a potentially great premise (I say 'potentially' only because I have no idea where you are intending on leading this!). If you do choose to continue (which I hope you do!), it would be great to see a series of separate scenes over the course of months or years where their friendship grows and Seth becomes infatuated - not sure if that triggers any inspiration for you :)

Seriously, this fandom needs more fics!

[sugarsnapy]

Yeah, I thought about writing it like that but I don't know..we'll see. :) And yeah, I agree about the fics. :P

Thank you very much for reading!

[author_abz]

oooooooooooh. I LOVE this!!!!

You should continue. DEFINITELY. I will read this forever until it gets finished! XD

Please continue!!!

[sugarsnapy]

lol, thank you so much :D *points at yr capslocks*

[author_abz]

... is using capslock bad?

It was the only way that I felt truly expressed my feelings. XD Because I really, really loved this. XD

You're welcome.

[sugarsnapy]

Thank you v.much again :)

Hmm..this'll be random, but whatevs. So, I'm looking for a job right now. Any advice?