SH 2015: So Stay Stay Stay (for snapbaeks)

[suholiday]

For: snapbaeks
From: ANONYMOUS until May 22, 2015

Title: So Stay Stay Stay
Rating: PG
Pairing(s)/Focus: Suho/Baekhyun
Length: 5,723 words
Summary: Maybe it’s time for Junmyeon to finally stop running.

Notes: To the recipient, I hope you enjoy! To H, for always lending a helping hand and giving me that extra push, you’re the best!

Comments

[snapbaeks]

AHHHHHHH *CLINGS TO YOU* I'M GOING TO CRY I LOVE YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS.

This is the prompt I desperately wanted and I nearly cried when I realized you picked this one.

This is just so beautifully written and so very Junmyeon and Baekhyun. I love how I could feel all the things Junmyeon was feeling and how whenever he was with Baekhyun things were so comfortable and easy.

And aldjf;askj the way they met is so perfect! Baekhyun would steal a bottle of tequila omg. And their picnic in the park and the picture on Junmyeon's phone and JUST EVERYTHING!!!!!

I also loved the relationship between Junmyeon and Jongdae. It was exactly how I would picture them as bffs.

I really wish I could give you a better comment but I really just have no words other than this is everything I had hoped it would be and I'm just so so happy right now.

//cries on you THANK YOU SO MUCH.

[iwantchocopie]

ah, this.
I just really love this.
like really really really.

I'm especially in love with how your characters talk.
(shut up, let me say this.)
you know. some of the dialogue may seem odd, but it isn't. not really. not at all.
like these little changes in speech that happen in both English and Korean. and other languages as well, of course.
but I love how you've included them here in a way that makes your characters witty.

and this is a very baekhyun thing because he does that a lot in korean. he plays with words a lot and I really like it.

I have a lot of favourites but if I had to pick one it'd be this:

Baekhyun smiles, white teeth gleaming. Everything about Baekhyun seems to sparkle or smolder, a collection of light and shadows. “So what should we do on this lovely night, with our pilfered goods?”

and you know, I could talk about this forever but I'm going to stop because I just don't want to copy/paste the entire fic.

please do keep writing.
♥

[shinealightrose]

Aww I love this kind of story where they just meet and get along. A picnic date even after how they met, and all the subsequent run-ins. Junmyeon is so cute, and after the way he was turned down by Yixing, he gets someone like Baekhyun.
“You’re kind of a brat.” Well, he is that. hehe
Thank you this was super sweet :))