SH 2015: in these stone walls (for babygunsho)

[suholiday]

For: babygunsho
From: ANONYMOUS until May 22, 2015

Title: in these stone walls
Rating: PG-13
Pairing(s)/Focus: Suho/Kris
Length: 10,667 words
Summary: "Would you call it love?"
Warning/s: passing mentions of minor character death, descriptions of war, slight gore.

Notes: well, this was an Experience. also, yifan is one year younger than joonmyun here. (

Comments

[mochkee]

author-nim!!!!!!

this fic is really beautiful!!! i really love how this fic of yours progressed. how you built a very strong foundation of friendship and young love in their childhood to how they grew up to face the challenges in life and how everything was so calming and soothing towards the ending. junmyeon's letters to jiaheng really conveyed a lot of emotions and i was bracing myself for an impending angst but i'm so glad you had a great mix of fluff and angst right here... but do know that those are the deadliest combinations ever!!! and the tattoo!!!! i have so much feelings for that and how you described the scene of junmyeom finding out about it was just lovely!!

you really did a great job author-nim and thank you for this great piece of work!!!

ps. i am still calming my heart because you added sehun in here!!!! ❤❤❤

[babygunsho]

My heart feels so full right now, almost bursting. God this is so so so beautiful. I'm so happy, thank you very much for this. I actually thought it will be different from my prompt but oh god, in the end, after those many words, I can't believe it's actually just like the prompt! this is definitely not like what I imagine (although I don't expect or imagine much) but god, I just can't believe it.

I love the tattoo, both on Yifan's hand and on his back. I always think that tattoos are good in backs, the large canvas to draw, you know? I love young Junmyeon, and Yifan beside him of course. I love the hardship Junmyeon had to go through, the reason why Yifan became a healer and wizard and Sehun! god, the way they bid him goodbye when he came back to his house, just like parents to their son haha.

I love it so much I feel like crying now...thank you so much, I definitely didn't regret joining suholiday, I can get this beautiful story from you. Love every bits of it, I love you so much for making this dear author... ;u;*throwhearts

[snow_meow]

I like how in the end the bonds which they share leads them back to each other.

[mairasm]

What a beautiful, meaningful read!
I loved it!
So poetic, truly touching!
Thank you so much for writing this!

[drizzlyaxes]

I really love how splendid the transition of the story went from the beginning until the end. Also, I enjoyed the little fluffy adventures that Joonmyun and Jiaheng had when they were younger. Your story on war and aristocracy is not complex, simple indeed but it still full of details and emotions as well. With your vivid writing style, I could feel the despair thickly coating Joonmyun's being as he fought in the war. I was really dreading the idea that things might have not ended well for them but I was really glad that they met a very happy end.

Oh, I was wondering how Jiaheng ends his own letters to Joonmyun? Does he reply with the same "yours, yours, yours, as ever?" or something along those lines? You see I was painfully grinning at the way Joonmyun ends each of his letter from a simple Yours to the lengthy but meaningful and sincere yours, yours, yours, as ever what a cute way to do it ㅋㅋㅋ

Now I am confused. Do I want to be more, or equally loyal? I really love this particular lines (and my most favorite as well) in Joonmyun'