Ok, so I loved this. The discussion between Mac & Parker at the beginning was great (and so, so true - the English language is so weird), and the subtle plot references were very well done (She’d been waiting to change everything about her part of the room since... a long time ago - genius).
And I really love Parker/Piz - way more than Parker/Logan or Veronica/Piz. I actually don't like P/L or V/P at all, mostly because those couples just don't make sense to me. But Parker & Piz? I could totally see that. Especially in something as well-written as this fic!
So. Lexie. I'm going to be honest, because I think you can handle it, and because you know how much I love you and your writing.
I do actually like this. Despite the Piz/Parker, I do like Parker, and this fic made me want to like Piz and P/P. They're both IC and even likeable...it's just my general dislike of Piz that keeps me from loving this, I think
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Awwwww that was lovely! It felt very normal. I guess a lot of the other VM pairings feel a little out there because everyone's super rich or has weird jobs or stuff. But these are just two normal people dropped in that world and they felt normal. YAY
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And I really love Parker/Piz - way more than Parker/Logan or Veronica/Piz. I actually don't like P/L or V/P at all, mostly because those couples just don't make sense to me. But Parker & Piz? I could totally see that. Especially in something as well-written as this fic!
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I do actually like this. Despite the Piz/Parker, I do like Parker, and this fic made me want to like Piz and P/P. They're both IC and even likeable...it's just my general dislike of Piz that keeps me from loving this, I think ( ... )
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I loved the earlier dialogue with Mac too.
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