Just Another Pain - Chapter [9]

May 10, 2013 15:23

Title : Just Another Pain..
Pairing: YeWon
side characters: Donghae, Kibum, Eunhyuk, Zhoumi, Luna, Aliee, Yunho
Genre: PG-13 (will vary as the story progress)
Summary: in which one is born with a Congenital heart malformation, choosing to drown in a self-created world of agony and despair, counting down his remaining days in life, while the other ( Read more... )

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choding_cloud May 10 2013, 13:07:50 UTC
they finally confessed!
and yewon's first kisa
yeaaaaaayyyyy

but who shot siwon's dad?
not yesung, rite?
no way!!
aaaahhhhh
you should put more sweet cheesy yewon moments before throwing the bomb...
keke

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suju_addict May 10 2013, 13:36:33 UTC
there might be more moments, don't worry, i can't just keep going without the romance or fluffiness each i na while ^^ ur always the first to read ^^ thanks sweety ^^

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cloudniita May 10 2013, 13:39:28 UTC
Fast update! :33333

Omo omo yewon on the bus i love their moment so much thanks to the driver who make my yewon huging lol
and yeaaaaaaa finally they kissing!! againa and again aaaaaaaahhh!! wae u dont write it more detail authornim? their romantic and long kisses agshsjakshznnzjdhdjz
But........................ What is it at the end of chap?? Yesung what? He shit siwon's father??? omgggggg please dont let this things ruin their love omg my yewon T______T

Hope u do fast update again soon! :D

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suju_addict May 10 2013, 14:21:38 UTC
am so bad at describing those little intimate moments :( but will try my best ^^ i can't spoil anything for you guys, but i would say that the REAL story line will kick off starting chapter 10 ;~; i will try my best Nitha ^^ thanks for reading/commenting bb

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suju_addict May 11 2013, 08:53:46 UTC
Yes its posted, and dear my-all-time-fav-author ur comment made me blush, you know, i wrote 7 fanfic in total and this is my 8th one, and i often get the same praise when it comes to conversations, which is really flattering, although i tried to make a big transformation in every piece i write after ''On Rainy Days'' i tried poetic one-shots and thanks to yewon passionate shippers the feedback is good, you know am starting to seriously worry over yewon fanfic community as so many ppl are going into hiatus and others just halt their writing activity until God knows when, am a passionate reader before being a writer, so i really hope those ladies reconsider :( am starting my senior year in university on August 25th so i will be so unbelievably busy starting then, but i will still try my best to post some nice stuff each in a while... i will do my best with this fic and SHUT UP your the best out there, remember? am a fan ^^

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innc_hy May 11 2013, 18:10:32 UTC
Whaat?? Nooo...Yesung didn't kill Siwon's dad!! I don't believe it!! It's Mrs. Kim's doing right? Right?? Right???

But..letting go of the shocking ending...finally YeWon confessed to each other and got together ^_^ Sooo sweet moments on the bus and their firs kiss.^^
But you should have let them have some fun before the shocking revelation....poor Siwonnie.

Anyway, thanks for the update ^^

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suju_addict May 11 2013, 19:39:46 UTC
dont worry .. they will have more moments for sure.. and i know that wws pretty shocking OTL thanks for reading ^^

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rayie_159 May 12 2013, 11:34:47 UTC
waaaaaaaahhhhh.......i giggling hard n in last part got blank
so speechles....when their love start growing and BAAAAANG that news came
you make me feeling like rollercoaster...but i like it
hope u'll update soon....but i'll get busy again tomorrow #pouting (_ _")>

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suju_addict May 15 2013, 15:19:42 UTC
hi there, sorry for the late reply >< i had a very busy week at uni ;_____________; and YES i know this chapter was so unexpected, my friends scolded me so hard for ruining it all with the last scene -_-' there is alot yet to happen in this story so don't jump to conclusion, enjoy reading, and please leave more comments, i'd like to interact with u guys after each update ^^

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