Just Another Pain - Chapter [10]

[suju_addict]

Title : Just Another Pain..
Pairing: YeWon
side characters: Donghae, Kibum, Eunhyuk, Zhoumi, Luna, Aliee, Yunho
Genre: PG-13 (will vary as the story progress)
Summary: in which one is born with a Congenital heart malformation, choosing to drown in a self-created world of agony and despair, counting down his remaining days in life, while the other

Comments

[choding_cloud]

ouwh
okay
now it's getting confusing
why yesung act as if he never seen siwon's dad?
does he lost some of his memories because of the mental breakdown? or he's actually innocent?
haaahhhh....
hope you can up date soon.... >.<
by the way, thank you for the kiss on the last part
at least there is still yewon moment....

[suju_addict]

i know there are ALOT of questions left unanswered :(

lol ur very welcome ^^ thanks for reading ^^

[nightcloud407]

oh MY...,getting confused toward yesung act. Does this mean his mom really make scenario abt he killing siwon fatHer. Hmmm..I gues i need to read the next chapter now
but actually Im not ready for the truth :'( same as siwon I guess >//<

This chapter is hearthbreaking, poor siwon. I can felt siwon stressed

[suju_addict]

indeed.. siwon is quite lost.. alot yet to revealed in the upcoming chapters..

[nightcloud407]

OH MY GOD OH MY GOD! what am I thinking?? I think there is one more chapter next >/////< seriously what did I think before *pull myhair*
now.. I AM REALLY REALLY DYING CURIOSLY HERE authornim TT____________TT #cries

[suju_addict]

sadly uni is being a pain in the butt.. i will try to update in couple of days though :')

[nightcloud407]

its OK deat, just take your time

[niayesungie]

eonnie i just read your fic from ch 1 - 10 tonight. and i just want you to know that you're really amaze me like what you had always done in your every fic! i'm amazed by your ability in creating smooth dialogue. you know, your dialogues are always light but meaningful. everything flows so naturally, not overly dramatic like some other writers would write (especially me in my fics). your dialogues are beautiful but aren't a bit cheesy. and i always love your Yesung characters. you always portray him as a really good person, who is always so unexpectedly kind to people who aren't really worth it for him. i wonder if every writer has their own fantasy of Yesung's real character and this is your typical yesung character? oooh i can't wait for the next chapter eonnie. please update. it's been a long time since i can read a yewon fic that can make me lost in the story, not even realizing my surroundings <3

[suju_addict]

awwwwwwwwwwwwwww Nia :D sweety u made my day with ur comment :') I lost faith in my writing so many times along the way, I just finished my final exams yesterday so I will try my best to update this fic soon, I will start my summer internship in 4 days so I have a busy summer yet again this year OTL // back to ur question about yesung, honestly am not really sure, its like I can't write yesung as a bad guy, maybe as a bi-polar one but not entirely bad or mean ! I have so so many fresh plots in my head but am not confident enough and I have no enough time to write chaptered fics, but then some stories really deserve to be spread in a range of 15 to 25 chapter tbh, but anyway, I will try my best to post more often, we need to keep yewon fanfic communities alive for the next to years.

again thanks for ur sweet comment Nia :') I wish I won't disappoint u on my upcoming updates and stories :')