if you should leave me (flashfic challenge #5: just for one day) pg

Jul 04, 2008 00:11


if you should leave me
357 wds. pg.
- kyuhyun/donghae; no names

author pureuda
summary sometimes you come to love a person just when you realize that that person doesn't love you back - one of life's small miseries that you grow both to love and hate.

disclaimer super junior © sm entertainment.

you never loved me. )

# challenge: just for one day, @ author: pureuda

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sujusakana July 4 2008, 07:53:24 UTC
WOW, short && beautiful.

What's really weird is everyone who reads this will envision it as either Donghae's or KyuHyun's POV && not everyone will be reading it with the same person in mind. So it's like TWO different stories! LOL
I think too much >.<

Again, this was really beautiful(:

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moukimokyu July 4 2008, 14:32:03 UTC
loooooooove. ♥

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reverokameorih July 4 2008, 16:43:45 UTC
Ç____Ç one of those pairing that touch me is certainly Kyuhae. That was beautiful (the details are strong), I wish it had a sequel...

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pureuda July 5 2008, 00:31:44 UTC
ha ha kyuhyun♥ i remember something like this?
fan: oppa, go on a date with me~
kyuhyun: i said i'm going out with donghae, why would i date you?
XDDD♥

bingooo~ it's kyuhyun's p.o.v.~

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veiledstar July 7 2008, 04:45:18 UTC
"you, who will never stop fretting about your height (you are almost as bad as hyukjae" I love how at first I immediately thought the speaker was Kyu but then after I reread it, realized it could also be taken as Kyu worrying about his tallness and therefore Hae's POV. How magical :]

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pureuda July 8 2008, 03:04:45 UTC
ha ha, thanks~ :D i was thinking of writing in kyuhyun's p.o.v. as i wrote it but i realized that it could go both ways if you thought about it. but, lol, i have guy friends who'd die to be kyu's height XD ♥

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