[fic] Teenage Dream

Dec 28, 2014 21:40

Title: Teenage Dream
Genre: romance/humour/fluff
Chapters: 6/6
Rating: R-ish?
Pairings: YunJae/JunChun
Summary: Yunho's young and eager. Yunho's too young and too eager for Jaejoong

a/n: I'm sick and I feel dead. I should start writing oneshots again. And Jaejoong is unsurprisingly dramatic.

Six )

pg-13, yunjae, changmin, yunho, fanfiction, humor, au, junchun, jaejoong, junsu

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neng2ovid December 28 2014, 23:02:50 UTC
Yay sequel please.

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suju_therapy December 29 2014, 11:08:22 UTC
But what if this sequel is heartbreaking D': ?

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neng2ovid December 30 2014, 01:24:12 UTC
No happy sequel please. Don't want to cry during the holidays.

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cassiopeiaika December 28 2014, 23:35:16 UTC
it is usually the other way, yunho the boring adult and jae the teenager and it is such a refreshing to see. and sooooo much fun. thanks for writing and sharing n__n
yaiy for sequel.

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suju_therapy December 29 2014, 11:31:09 UTC
Glad to hear you think it refreshing. I can't quite remember if I have read a teen Yunho and adult Jaejoong...I would like, though..

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shinchul303 December 29 2014, 00:23:11 UTC
1) don't even think of deleting your stories

2) sequel YES!

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suju_therapy December 29 2014, 11:39:40 UTC
...but there are some so bad...*cringes* anyway, when haven't I written a sequel to somewhat unfinished story? Sequels are like my trademark by now... <.

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charmaine08 December 29 2014, 01:08:15 UTC
ahhh i havent been on lj for quite awhile and u updated so many chapters! <3
Sequel please!

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suju_therapy December 29 2014, 11:47:58 UTC
Sequel is in the process of being written. Although now I have confused myself as to where it's going... Just like with this story, it's going nowhere :D

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chihana11 December 29 2014, 01:17:49 UTC
I have no idea what these mistakes could possibly be.
Your stories are very well written and refreshingly funny and then serious, just like life.

But reading out loud before you post might help you catch misspellings or grammar issues.

I freaking love this Changmin!

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suju_therapy December 29 2014, 12:16:48 UTC
Actually, I'm malicious when it comes to editing my drafts. I draft the entire story and then I... Rewrite it completely because I dislike it?...

As for reading loud, I fear I will just end up mispronouncing words.

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chihana11 December 29 2014, 16:10:21 UTC
Read out loud when you are alone. No one will hear you.
If none of your chingus offer then I will give being a beta a shot.
I'm not sure how much help I will be but,English is my first language and I'm willing to try.

Would you like to be friends? Smiles shyly. I can send you a request if you want?

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suju_therapy December 30 2014, 08:48:24 UTC
I want to be your friend anyway. Right now I'm pretty dead, though, due to being completely sick so I will send you a message later.

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