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Apr 29, 2007 00:37


Hey Hey
I actully have a new poem to post.. I havent been writing in a while so Im gonna start again so here it is.. 
I dont have a title so if anyone has any ideas feel free to tell me -smiles-

She runs. The ground is hard and dry. The bodies have fallen and drowned in blood. She runs barefoot, She may avoid the bodies, Tho she cannot avoid the ( Read more... )

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jamesbloodfang April 29 2007, 09:20:55 UTC
I've always liked that poem of yours. As for a title how about: Hope Never Dies.

The sun and light represents hope and throughout the poem she keeps on going no matter what her pain. She always keeps her hope and in the end she finds it. It reminds me of a quote, "There is no worse death than the end of hope."

You make a very good point with the rest of your entry but when somebody suffers it is very hard for them to see all the good things in their life, they are clouded by the pain. That is just how the human mind works, it can be very selfish. When people do learn to see past their own pain and look at the bigger picture it makes them very special indeed. You have done this, you are very special; especially to me. You mean so much to me.

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