Poems writen on 01 May 2007

[sukie_kid_faith]

Was I right?

Was I right,
To stand and wait?
Was I right,
To let the hope be my rope?
Did I follow my heart?
Did I make the wrong choice?

I was caught in a moment when I hurt
When it was all nothing
It was all meaningless.

Its like Iam walking on broken glass
I could keep on going to find the truth.
That I will do,
I just need to know...
Was i right,
Should

Comments

[jamesbloodfang]

Wow! I am well impressed.

[kor_blimey]

i prefer the 1st one, i quite like the first one...as im in one of me moody mind-sets...and i can relate to that poem...well done :) Very good :P