Jean/Roy 2 (Chapter 4)

Jul 18, 2008 01:23

Title: To Really Free One's Self.
Chapter Title: Prey
Author: sull89Fandom: FullMetal Alchemist ( Read more... )

pairing: jean/roy, yaoi fics, chaptered stories, character: jean havoc, fic: fma, character: roy mustang, character: zolf kimbley, story: to really free one's self

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lost_lover2790 July 18 2008, 06:43:21 UTC
*bites nails* Ack! Jeanie! *kicks Kimbley only to run in the corner and hide* Omg! Roy to the Rescue?...well...Roy's to late...but still!

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lost_lover2790 July 18 2008, 06:43:49 UTC
oh...I forgot to mention , M-azing update!

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sull89 July 18 2008, 08:02:49 UTC
lol, Roy to the belated rescue, hopefully. I feel bad for Jean, and I'm the one who wrote this...
^^ And thank you!

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witchitar08 July 18 2008, 07:57:36 UTC
Woo! Four chapters, and I didn't even have to push you to write this one! I'm proud of you, honey. I still think your strongest chapters were the ones with the metaphors, but I do so love how you compared Kimbles to a lioness XD I feel so bad for poor Jean! I want Roy to come home early for something and catch Kimbley before he goes any farther, but I know he won't. Cos you're a twisted little drama whore like that. X3 Keep going honey, I'm excited to see what comes next! (woo, pun =D)

and i love you!

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philaday August 4 2008, 01:59:38 UTC
Kimbley is such a freakin' bastard! You make sure we don't feel a shred of pity for this freak. I'm really hoping Roy shows up and fries him to a deep golden brown!

Deliciously evil!

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sull89 August 4 2008, 04:32:14 UTC
lol, yes he is. Haha, I'll do my best. He's a hard man to feel pity for when he doesn't even pity himself. (I do love Kimbley though, he's so wonderfully wrong.)

^^ Thank you, I'm glad you think so!

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