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Lavi/Kanda 2 (Part Four)

Dec 03, 2009 17:38

Title: ... Wear What?
Author: sull89
Fandom: D.Gray-Man
Pairing: Lavi/Kanda
Rating: NC-17
Warning: Oh, gawd... Porn. Lots of porn.
Summary: Kanda wishes, more than anything, that he hadn't made that bet...

Note: Co-written with wordsofrandom, who, in other terms, happens to be my fiancee.

( ... Wear What? (Part Four) )

pairing: lavi/kanda, fic: dgm, yaoi fics, story: ... wear what?, character: lavi, chaptered stories, character: kanda yu

Comments 21

Shell-Shocked Beyond Belief pywen December 4 2009, 03:30:24 UTC

*slack jawed*... Damn. This lemon beat all those I've read so far flat since I hit puberty. Congratulations, you've definitly broken the longest lemon ever!

Also, it really needs a sequel. It really, really, really needs one. Pleeeaaase? *puppy dog eyes doubled with chibi pout*

Re: Shell-Shocked Beyond Belief sull89 December 4 2009, 05:13:29 UTC

lol, thank you. I am glad you enjoyed, and thank you so much for commenting!

XD, actually, it has one in the works. Fiancee and I are like... maybe a third of the way done, but then decided we wanted to write Lucky instead, so... It will be finished eventually!

Ohai, nameless fiancee here XD wordsofrandom December 8 2009, 16:47:01 UTC

I think long lemons are becoming our trademark. We can never write just sex, we've gotta write story, too. And then I'm a drama whore so there's usually at least some drama in there too.

But yes! Sequel! We're working on that... but we've both got a ton going on in school so it's on hiatus at the moment. But it looks like it's going to be right around as long as this one (and knowing me, it will have some drama).

I'm so happy to hear you liked it though!! Thank you thank you!

LIKE WOAH meggle_star December 5 2009, 20:43:55 UTC

...I think I just died. And flew up to sweet, sweet LaviYuu heaven. XD

This was really long but-- the inner pervert in me in thanking you because---hotdamn that was probably the hottest thing I've read in a long time. I mean, WHEW. <3

AND SEQUEL WOULD BE LOVELY, YES. I would eat it up immediately. <333

Re: LIKE WOAH sull89 December 6 2009, 00:26:15 UTC

lol, yay! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Yes, it was long. It wasn't supposed to be this long. But fiancee and I just got really, really into it, and sixty three Word pages later... here we are. XD But I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

lol, we will finish it eventually. Not sure when - last two weeks of the semester are a bitch for doing anything other than work, but it will be done! Thank you for commenting, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Re: LIKE WOAH wordsofrandom December 8 2009, 16:48:31 UTC

I'm glad you liked the length. I was worried that everyone would be like "HOLY SHIT THIS IS LONG WTF" or something... not that long porn is a bad thing. o_o

But yay, I'm glad it's been so well received. Thank you!!

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sull89 December 6 2009, 06:04:47 UTC

^^ Yay! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! Fiancee and I can't just write sex. There is always some form of love/cuddling, lol, so I'm glad you liked that too!

lol, it'll come out... late January, maybe. After finals and Christmas and trip to France. But I promise it will come out! Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

wordsofrandom December 8 2009, 16:49:38 UTC

*whisperwhisper* Sequel will probably come out before that... we write furiously when we have nothing else to do.

*collecting sizzling remains of my brains* satancat December 7 2009, 22:25:57 UTC

holy hell, that was the most epic lemon I've ever read o___o!!
I can't even...like...whoa.

THANK YOU for creating this absolutely epic piece of sheer sexiness. When I saw this prompt on the kinkmeme I nearly glossed over it because I personally am not a big fan of cross-dressing but your cross-dressing Yu was so in character and deliciously angry :D the whole dominance/submission thing between Lavi and Yu was also freaking fantastic.

*sizzles in puddle of melty goo that is now my brain*

Re: *collecting sizzling remains of my brains* sull89 December 8 2009, 16:45:57 UTC

Fiancee (I read the comments to her so we can both respond.) and I are thrilled that you enjoyed it so much! I'm all for cross dressing, but only if it's in character, so I strove to make sure Yu stayed that way. I'm glad to see he did in your opinion! And we're ecstatic that you enjoyed it enough for your brain to melt, but we would be happy to help clean up, too, for we like our readers to remain whole. *holding broom*

But thank you so much for reading and for taking the time to comment! So glad you enjoyed it!

Re: *collecting sizzling remains of my brains* wordsofrandom December 8 2009, 17:00:43 UTC

The way this works is that I wrote Lavi and she wrote for Kanda... and she writes an AMAZING Kanda. My Lavi is... decent, heh.

But yes, we both take pains to make sure the characters stay in character, so I'm glad that helped you enjoy the cross-dressing!

*holding a mop* I definitely agree... our readers should be in one piece to enjoy the sequel!

Re: *collecting sizzling remains of my brains* satancat December 9 2009, 17:54:01 UTC

your lavi was more than decent O__O!! he was the perfect mix of dominant with sexy weaknesses, both devious and soft-hearted--the scenes where he catches himself after realizing kanda was truly uncomfortable/genuinely pissed melted my heart.

So lol. not only did my brain melt from the sexy, my heart melted from the interspersed moments of cute and sweet too XDD win win!

Alrighty, I will attempt to collect myself in time for the sequel *__*

closeincline December 9 2009, 06:15:53 UTC

This was a seriously awesomely long lemon, I enjoyed every minute of it, well done!

sull89 December 9 2009, 15:17:41 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much, and thank you so much for commenting!