Germany/France 2

[sull89]

Title: Punctuality Is Optional
Author: sull89
Fandom: Hetalia
Pairing: Germany/France
Rating: T
Warning: Softcore mansex.
Summary: Ludwig is known for being on time - to every event, for everything. His brother, on the other hand, is anything but. One night, with something other than partying on his mind, Francis shows Ludwig that every once and a while, it’s

Comments

[traumschwinge]

Aw, I like how you write these two. I'm always glad to see GerFra fanfictions. Francis being uke is even more rare (I like it though, I don't care who tops in that pairing).
There's only one thing that bugs me about it. Love as a pet name doesn't translate "Liebe" but "Liebling". Sorry, but your icon sort of provoced this remark. (I know my English isn't perfect and stuff, it's just ... I'm reading "Liebe" as a petname in so many fanfictions that it's really unnerving. There are a lot of good lists on the internet which give an overview of petnames in various languages. GIYF)

[sull89]

I have a lot of trouble seeing Ludwig bottoming. It just seems lulzy to me. But I am happy to see any GerFra exist at all, so I am not too picky with the positions sexually. I'm glad you enjoyed it and thank you for taking the time to review! (And I did not know that. Now I do. Knowing that "liebe" is "love" in German, I thought it would translate the same as a pet name. It never occurred to me to google it.)

[traumschwinge]

Oh, if you want, you could take a look into Veille-amour here on livejournal. It's a group for GerFra.
(Oh, okay. I didn't mean to critize too much, I'm just not exactly in a good mood today and the usage of petnames and insults in other languages is something which annoys me a lot especially since I have seen a lot of people acting like: "It sounds right to me, I write for American's so I don't care how it sounds to native speakers.")

[sull89]

Thank you for pointing that out. I had not been able to find an LJ comm for the pair and I did want to, so I greatly appreciate you taking the time to tell me. And again, I am glad you took the time to read and review.
(No, it's okay, I certainly appreciate your telling me that. I did not know and I am happy to now, and I can certainly see how - as a native speaker - that would get to you. I can fix it from now on. I was only explaining why I had written it that way. And I don't write for Americans, I write for anyone who wants to read. We all just make mistakes sometimes.)

[nivell]

OOh, this was sexy and sweet at the same time. And I love the mention of PrusAus in there finally getting married.

[sull89]

Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed it! ~ And I love being able to sneak some of my other top pairings in my fics. It's a fun little game to play as an author. Thank you again, I appreciate the review!

[coeurgryffondor]

This, I can't. They were both in character but still worked together without coming off like cats and dogs. And I love what Ludwig in his thoughts concedes that Francis is better at. They'll always have competition between them but this still made me smile from ear to ear.

[sull89]

<3 I am so glad you think so and very happy I could make you smile like that! I am still new to writing the both of them, so it's awesome you thought they were in character! Thank you so much for the review, I greatly appreciate it and I'm glad you enjoyed the fic!

[coeurgryffondor]

Well they're two of my favorite characters so it surprises me you said they were new in your writing repertoire. I've been trying to find how I want to write them and you seem to have discovered one wonderful method.

[sull89]

*nodnod* I've been roleplaying them for a little while, but that was only my second fic involving them. And I think my Ludwig is stronger than my Francis, but there's room for improvement all around. I am so happy to hear you say that! I like knowing I was maybe a little inspiring ~

[artemis10002000]

Hahaha, oh France, you naughty one! *laughs* Germany being seduced into being a whole two hours late, now that's a feat he can be truly proud of.

[sull89]

XD I know, right? It was a winwinwin for Francis. Ludwig's late, he came three times, and he got to rub it in Gil's face. XD I am glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reading!

[aluha]

So gorgeous! I'm really happy Ludwig got late to that party, Francis' much more important! ^___^

[sull89]

Thank you! I am so glad you enjoyed it and thank you for the review!