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Because of You [Chapter 21B]

Jul 05, 2008 10:02

Title: Because of You [21B/?]

Author: Sum3r

Pairing: JaeMin

Rating: R (Lemon)

Warning: Delinquent!Jae and Uke!Min = Smex / Language

Disclaimer: Plot is mine. Characters aren’t.

Summary: Min is a simple boy who was rejected by his first love. However, when he agrees to tutor a delinquent, his life turns upside down in ways he never wished it would.
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p: jaejoong/changmin, p: yoochun/junsu, p: junki/se7en, fanfiction: dbsk, fic: multi

Comments 99

kimimeemaya333 July 5 2008, 15:08:50 UTC

wahahha first again!! ^_______^

kimimeemaya333 July 5 2008, 15:40:24 UTC

ahhh someone's out to get Jae, I wonder who it is? T_T
At least we know they both know that there's a change in their relationship, and now I can't wait till Jae rescues and protects Changmin, but from your a/n it's not what I expect right??
---> your gonna make me cry. v________v

sum3r July 7 2008, 01:32:44 UTC

You'll def. find out who it is in the next chapter ^^~
well....we'll see :D there's a lot more in stoer for them, so well see how it turns out.
i'll try not to, but it can't be helped, these next couple of chapters are going to be rough D:

thank you for reading! ♥

heartoffire03 July 5 2008, 15:13:30 UTC

DAMN! 2ND D:

shirahim3 July 5 2008, 15:21:16 UTC

3rd?^^ SPOTTO

shirahim3 July 5 2008, 16:14:57 UTC

date <3 mangdongie <3

but DAAAAAAAANG!!!

O_o

wth???

sTAlker??? If they are gonna do something HARMFUL to my Minnie, I swear that I WILL KILL THEM WAAAAAAAH

No, prob Jae will kill them first waaaaaaah~

AND I DUN WANNA BUY TISSUES T_T I DUN WANNA CRY huhuhu

Update asap, okie? *teary eyes* <3

sum3r July 7 2008, 01:35:45 UTC

LOL, i couldnt help it ♥ i fell in love with the puppy as soon as i saw it ^^~

i kno, i kno, but it's important to the story and well, you'll see why. altho i dont want Changmin to have an attacker either D: and XDDD yup, Jae prob would. i could see him now too, "get the fuck away from him!" right?

i'll try my best *hugs*

thank you for reading~! ♥

chloe1910 July 5 2008, 15:21:18 UTC

Reserve spot for more comments later!!

chloe1910 July 5 2008, 15:52:19 UTC

Good God!!!! What do you have in store for us now..thigns was just getting all cozy and nice and you have to show us the photographs! Who's the one who took the photos?? Somene hired by Jae's dad????? Or some other psycho or stalker????? Oh good.. Me dun wanna prepare tissues!!

NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

sum3r July 7 2008, 01:38:22 UTC

DDDDDDD: I WANT THINGS TO BE COZY TOO. but this is important, and you'll find out why in the next chapter, even though things are going to be tough for them. D:

and you just might need too luv, you just might ♥

thank you for reading~! ^^!

miszbee July 5 2008, 15:24:17 UTC

ahhh the date...
it was just sweet...
their feelings are developed now and they just need more courage to admit it...
still I love it...
ahh I sense more drama!!!
waiting for the next update!!
p/s:it's good to have you back~~

sum3r July 7 2008, 01:41:42 UTC

i'm glad you enjoyed it ^^~!
it was sweet right? Something unexpected in such a story XDDD but it's the lightest chapter so far and prob one of my faves ♥
and i agree, they should just suck up the courage and say it, they're that close. but it hasn't completely ended yet, so there's more coming for the both of them.

i'll try to update soon, and thank you! ^^!

thank you for reading~! ♥