What Is Done In the Waiting (Alice/Uncas) 2/3

Mar 08, 2010 13:49

Disclaimer: I make no profit off this story it is simply a way to amuse myself and anyone who is bored enough to read it.

Summary: Alice/Uncas. "She wants him to come for her, to walk through the proverbial fire, to save her. She wants him to be the Nathaniel to her Cora. She wants to live." Alice excerpts up to the fateful cliff scene.

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petzipellepingo March 8 2010, 23:54:43 UTC
It should not be perfect. She is tired and afraid and so horribly sad. It should not feel good or right or any of those things. It should not be perfect at all.

But it is.

Yes, you can certainly see that in the film. Nice one.

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sumhope March 9 2010, 04:50:58 UTC
Thankyou : )

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leobrat March 9 2010, 01:57:38 UTC
It is utterly amazing, the way that you write these two. They're often painted as the 'better siblings', the more delicate, less selfish siblings, but no not here. Here they are greedy with want for each other, and violent and angry and so full of life, that it adds even more poignancy to their already unforgettable story.

Already eagerly awaiting the next part!

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sumhope March 9 2010, 04:54:03 UTC
Oh my thanks for all of your kind words. Your making me blush.
They were my favorite characters of the story. Everything they didn't say spoke more to me than all of what Cora and Nathaniel did say. I don't know if that makes sense. lol

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sunrunnersioned October 5 2010, 01:30:52 UTC
omg that ending was wonderful!!!!!!!

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