I might as well ditch my dismay; Yoochun/Junsu
I might as well ditch my dismay
694 words. PG-13.
- DBSK; Yoochun/Junsu.
author onew.
summary There are three things to be noted about Yoochun: he has no sense of balance, he is a man of very weak resolve, and he has developed a liking for Junsu.
notes Written for a challenge at kpfw 9.0. I haven't written for DBSK in so long, much less YooSu, so ( Read more... )
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(I'm on my phone so it might take a while to read and leave another comment after but OMG YAY **)
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overall I have to say the fic got better and better towards the end, both in style/writing and content ♥
If anything, he could just be going through this awkward phase.
haha, I'm sure he has wondered that already, in reality I mean. but srsly.. you don't have a years long awkward phase ;D
"I wonder if I try too hard sometimes,"
I really like how you portrayed Junsu here
Yoochun's breath hitches when Junsu loses balance and the distance between them is drawn to a mere few centimeters. Junsu's lips hover, and then linger, and when Junsu pulls away Yoochun grips the edge of the washing machine tight for fear of falling.
so Junsu kissed him right, right? lol I'm not really sure but the 'linger' makes me think he kissed him ;;
(ofc then I know they kissed bc they talk about it. lol) but I like how you described it, that like I couldn't really be sure of it at first.
and how it was an accident. and how chun gripped the edge of the washing machine.
"I like you, if ( ... )
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Quotebacks, omg ;____; Thank you for taking time to read and actually quoting stuff in your comment. That really means a lot ♥ And I wish the great fandom writers would go back and write fics, too! I miss the boys :(
Again, thanks! ♥ And I should get to writing that fic for you...
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~my favourite part!^^
"I like you, if that actually matters." I LOVE THIS ONE ^o^
Lovely Yoosu~ i like it. a lot. like a lot, a lot. :)
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