hi onnieeeeeeeeeeeeeee, i really glad to know that whoaaaaaaaaaa youre updated!! *tackles you hehehehehehehehe omoooooooo, this is sooooooooooo beautiful!!i love this onnieeeeeeeeeeee..i love how hae got jealous of kyu!! heheehehehehehehehehe and i love how hannie kissed hae after they shouted at each other.. i loooooooooooooveeeee everything in here onnieeeeeeeeeeee..and of course i loveeeeeeee youuuuuuuuuuuuu *hugs you down kekekekekekekekeke ^^ and the moment hannie said bedroom, my perv mind said awwwwwwwwwwwww they will do ittt!!but got concious when i remember the rating!! LOLS =DD than you onnie onnieeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.. waiting for your next updateeeeeee!!love yaaaaaaaaaaaaa *kisses ^___________^
LOL~ You're always this jumpy. *pats your head* Thank you, I'm glad you liked this and don't worry. It's rated 13 this time round so I won't hunt you down :P <3
This isn't crappy at all... I actually think this is the best of your fics construction-wise to date.
When I saw the title, I know I'm gonna like it because I'm such a sucker for things like second chances and all... And I think you did a pretty good job in portraying that...
Although content-wise, I feel like there is something missing I can't point out. It's like the emotion is there but still not there? This is making me nuts for being too analytic...
Can't I just shut up and say that this is one hella good story?..
Awww, thank you so much. Yes yes yes, I get what you mean. Something is missing and I feel that too. This story is just not quite there yet. I don't know, maybe... the emotions are not quite intense enough? Or... I'm not really going deep enough into what they're feeling/thinking inside?
Hahaha~ Well, actually I love it when you leave your comments because they're very contructive and I need to know exactly where I need to work on. So... thanks for thinking that this is one hella good story but pleaseeeee... DON'T SHUT UP! :)
Aw it's cute. Like hannie could ever really let Hae go lol, or Hae let go of Geng.
Warm and fuzzy feeling for this~
Normally i'd flail a little more cuz, don't doubt me, i really really love this fic, but I'm kinda emotionally exhausted right now, so paz flailing is a little difficult.
Yep, this is the one and I eventually still had the title changed. The previous one just sounded wrong. Lol. Ahhh, thank you! Well, if Tori says this is good, then I might as well just feel good about this piece of fic already. XD
I feel so fluffy inside while reading this, and even after I read it, I still feel so fluffy... My Mama thinks I'm weird 'coz after I've read this, I'm smiling like an idiot... /facepalm
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omoooooooo, this is sooooooooooo beautiful!!i love this onnieeeeeeeeeeee..i love how hae got jealous of kyu!! heheehehehehehehehehe
and i love how hannie kissed hae after they shouted at each other.. i loooooooooooooveeeee everything in here onnieeeeeeeeeeee..and of course i loveeeeeeee youuuuuuuuuuuuu *hugs you down kekekekekekekekeke ^^
and the moment hannie said bedroom, my perv mind said awwwwwwwwwwwww they will do ittt!!but got concious when i remember the rating!! LOLS =DD
than you onnie onnieeeeeeeeeeeeeeee..
waiting for your next updateeeeeee!!love yaaaaaaaaaaaaa *kisses ^___________^
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<3
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This isn't crappy at all... I actually think this is the best of your fics construction-wise to date.
When I saw the title, I know I'm gonna like it because I'm such a sucker for things like second chances and all... And I think you did a pretty good job in portraying that...
Although content-wise, I feel like there is something missing I can't point out. It's like the emotion is there but still not there?
This is making me nuts for being too analytic...
Can't I just shut up and say that this is one hella good story?..
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Hahaha~ Well, actually I love it when you leave your comments because they're very contructive and I need to know exactly where I need to work on. So... thanks for thinking that this is one hella good story but pleaseeeee... DON'T SHUT UP! :)
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Aw it's cute. Like hannie could ever really let Hae go lol, or Hae let go of Geng.
Warm and fuzzy feeling for this~
Normally i'd flail a little more cuz, don't doubt me, i really really love this fic, but I'm kinda emotionally exhausted right now, so paz flailing is a little difficult.
Just trust me on this. It's good.
Saranghae~ <3
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*hugs* saranghae <33
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My Mama thinks I'm weird 'coz after I've read this, I'm smiling like an idiot... /facepalm
Jealous Hae is always adorable... <333
Lovely HanHae is lovely.... :D
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