Propina ∼ The Recurring Dream (1/3/16; WC 251) Q

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Propina ∼ The Recurring Dream1

I like men who have a future and women who have a past.

∼ Oscar Wilde, The Picture of Dorian Gray

"I'd love to make MAD, PASSIONATE LOVE to you

Comments

I figured out what propina meant

[annieo]

This is good.

Re: I figured out what propina meant

[summercircles]

Way to go. If you need any more help, just let me know.

And Again

[motheremily]

I laughed at the quotes, "If I could see you naked", and "Unfertilized"!

(Original posted 7/9/08 after entry in Pandemo)

[sydneydaile]

Funny stuff, but Despina seriously needs to get away from this guy!

Tense Shift

[pandemo]

Did you catch the tense shift? This is back to the old dream material, then contrasting it with real life... I'm trying to draw the parallels.

I have now posted the dream stuff at the end, (as much of it as is currently in the computer, at any rate), but I'm not doing a good job of integrating it with the story. When I try to make a daily notation, the TIME LINE is impossible! The story reads fine, but a day by day rendition shows some pretty horrendous holes.

Where'sMeKilt was in favor of jettisoning the journal, but with that, the magic realism dissolves = project unsuccessful. At first, I was using a journal page (past tense, more florid style), followed by real life (present tense).