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Zine Feedback for Authors!

Sep 21, 2006 15:36

Feedback for zine submissions found in the comments section of this post!

ETA: Please be sure that, when leaving feedback, you're hitting 'reply' to the actual initial feedback comment, and not a reply to the entry. There's a few at the end there that I have--no clue where they should go.

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FB for Concord by Zoe Rayne svmadelyn September 21 2006, 20:47:40 UTC

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Re: FB for Concord by Zoe Rayne fairestcat September 22 2006, 13:47:49 UTC

holy fucking guh.

I figure you know by now that I'm a total fangirl for this entire series and I was SO excited to see more. And these three together! OMG yes. Ronon so matter of factly following any order John gives him. And Rodney remembering why he got the collar in the first place. And John, God, he planned that encounter didn't he? He obviously knew that Rodney was awake the whole time and he set it up in the way guaranteed to make Rodney the most comfortable and turned on.

Damn that's hot.

Re: FB for Concord by Zoe Rayne z_rayne September 23 2006, 21:00:51 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm glad people are reading the series; I know it's kind of different from what both casspeach and I usually write, so I'm glad it's got an audience.

Honestly, I'm not sure if John planned the encounter or not. If he did, he's a clever boy. If not, he's just incredibly lucky. *g*

Re: FB for Concord by Zoe Rayne wildestranger September 22 2006, 13:58:29 UTC

Gnah but this is hot. And possessive!John is a delightful thing. :0

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FB for Learn Something New by Speranza svmadelyn September 21 2006, 20:47:59 UTC

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Re: FB for Learn Something New by Speranza kickthebeat September 22 2006, 05:07:49 UTC

john surfing will never not be hot. :( also, your john is this was sort of awesome, and i loved him a lot. brill brill brill brill.

Re: FB for Learn Something New by Speranza cesperanza September 25 2006, 05:19:07 UTC

Thank you so much! (We need a whole John-surfing ficathon, because--yes, Jesus, it's just hot as all hell!)

Re: FB for Learn Something New by Speranza das_kabinett September 22 2006, 05:30:10 UTC

Oh, yes, omg, seriously.

You have no idea how hard this story pushed my buttons. I mean, physics! And math! And Perelman! (I've been waiting for references to him with a certain nerdy breathlessness, though my money was on him going to Atlantis and that's why he missed his Fields medal... but I digress) And Surfing! And flirting!

I love how both John and Rodney consider themselves together before they actually fuck, and I love the beautiful way you close the story. The echoing of the beginning allows the story to both feel complete and indicative of a long and happy future (or so I hope.)

Also? John, you're such a dork with the singing and the realizing you're going too fast and the loads of food and, golly gee I should stop before I embarress myself further.

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FB for Mai Tai's and Coconut Sunscreen by Elandria Lore svmadelyn September 21 2006, 20:48:19 UTC

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Re: FB for Mai Tai's and Coconut Sunscreen by Elandria Lore etben September 22 2006, 14:01:15 UTC

Mmmm. Tasty!

Re: FB for Mai Tai's and Coconut Sunscreen by Elandria Lore wildestranger September 22 2006, 14:03:32 UTC

Hee. Hot and lovely. ;)

Re: FB for Mai Tai's and Coconut Sunscreen by Elandria Lore toomuchplor September 22 2006, 17:32:48 UTC

Hee! I love socially retarded Rodney and helplessly attracted John. *g*

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FB for Summer Blockbuster by Smittywing svmadelyn September 21 2006, 20:48:39 UTC

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Re: FB for Summer Blockbuster by Smittywing kickthebeat September 22 2006, 05:08:53 UTC

i could not stop laughing. what can i say, i enjoy a good sam carter fantasy scene. deeelightful.

Re: FB for Summer Blockbuster by Smittywing smittywing September 23 2006, 18:48:29 UTC

Thank you! Sam and Rodney are never not funny together. :)

Re: FB for Summer Blockbuster by Smittywing wildestranger September 22 2006, 14:06:47 UTC

Heh. Wonderful. :)

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FB for The Code Duello by rose_emily svmadelyn September 21 2006, 20:49:03 UTC

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Re: FB for The Code Duello by rose_emily oxoniensis September 22 2006, 07:31:54 UTC

*dies laughing*

Oh, this is just brilliant!

Re: FB for The Code Duello by rose_emily toomuchplor September 25 2006, 03:29:51 UTC

Thanks! I think I was feeling silly that night. *g*

Re: FB for The Code Duello by rose_emily etben September 22 2006, 14:00:45 UTC

oh, that's just beautiful - the structure is excellent, the premise is hysterical, and the end is priceless. Your Rodney voice is amazing - snarky and harsh without being overdone.

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