Ouran Fanfiction!! OH NOES

[summerkins]

Author: summerkins
Fandom: Ouran Host Club
Characters/Pairings: Fujioka Haruhi / Morinozuka Takashi
Title: Stranded
Rating: PG - Only kissing really
Disclaimer: Not mine! Characters belong to Bisco Hatori.
Notes: Written for one_blanket Oh Em Gee. I cannot believe i whipped this out in just a couple hours! Much much MUCH love to rosephantom for the help and betaing. She helped me

Comments

[cal_reflector]

Not bad... Haruhi catches Mori starting at her lips... not bad, not bad at all.

[summerkins]

*beams* thanks!

[keiko_kichi]

Woo! Mori/Haruhi ficlet! <3

Well done and I could only find one teeny tiny mistake...

She went and sat down on the mattress with was the only other thing in the shack, besides a few pillows.

I assume that with is which

Thanks for the nice read! ^w^

[summerkins]

Yeah...i missed a couple things like that, but managed to fix most of them. I shall fix that right away!

[ll_smiles_ll]

ahhhh! I love this!! So sweet. I like the mori/haruhi pairing! They are just so cute together!! More please? x]

[summerkins]

Heh....Well we shall see. This was fun and i liked it...so i may do a...continuation/sequal. But i dunno.

[degrees]

Hello! I just read your fic, and instead of just moving on and not saying anything, I figured I'd leave a little constructive criticism for you. I really hope you don't take this in the wrong light, as I'm in no way attempting to flame you, I just thought I'd point out something that bothered me, just for your information. Use it, don't, up to you. I just want to be helpful

[summerkins]

Yeah...i'm not sure why i did that...except i didn't know any snowy mountian areas in Japan and wanted to leave it open XD thanks for the tip though.

[kaikinisshoku]

Ahh, the fluff~ nwn~ ♥

[summerkins]

That's a good thing hai?

[kaikinisshoku]

Chya. x3;

[summerkins]

Good! I was a bit worried for a moment lol

Love your icon!