New Year, New Fic

[summerren]

Title: The Floors Are Falling Out From Everybody
Author: sunsetdreamer (summerren)
Rating: Strong T
Word Count: 6k
Spoilers: None
Summary: When she takes both a literal and figurative step back in these moments, she sees that somewhere along their journey it has become difficult to conclusively draw a line where one of them ends and the other begins

Comments

[mendenbar01]

Different, but totally delightful.

[summerren]

It's definitely a little weird, so it makes me happy that it still worked for you, heh. Thank you!

[tuberose08]

I loved this. You write the characters very well and their dialogue is spot-on, imo.

Happy New Year!

Rosie

[summerren]

I'm glad you liked it! Thanks.

[jinglebelle55]

Enjoyed this very much. Always fun to find something just a little different from the norm.
Thanks for sharing.

[summerren]

I'm glad you feel that way :) I finished writing it and then sort of tilted my head and went, 'well this is... different?' but decided to go with it anyway, ha. Thank you.

[c_canadensis]

That was lovely. Sweet, with realistic and fair characterization.

I really like this passage:
So she understands when he pulls her against his chest and lowers his head to the curve of her shoulder. She understands his need to press his mouth to her flesh and nip gently. But when he nuzzles her neck and kisses that spot just beneath her ear, her anger returns with a vengeance and she pushes away from him. ...It feels right, for how much they love and get each other, even when annoyed, without the problem being magically smoothed over so quickly.

[summerren]

Their dynamic is so complex and interesting, and I think one of my favourite things about this series is we get a million and one ways to play around with that. I'm glad you liked this one :) Thank you.