Desperate to Love You [6/?]

[summersolitisce]

Title: Desperate to Love you
Pairing: Yunho/Jaejoong
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance, Fluff
Rating: PG-13
Warning: UnBetaed
Summary: Jung Yunho is a mafia in disguise who had bought Kim Jaejoong in an auction. How will these two change each other if their personalities are fire and water?

The Mysterious Poem

Comments

[kattan69]

Happy 2015 New Year!!!

Now who is A.C.E? Someone from the inside is leaking their activities to the enemies. They better find it out. The plot has thicken.

[meepnbeep]

* _* JAEJOONG IS SECRETLY A SPY?!
I can't wait for more~
thank you for updating!

[awshin]

Huh what? Is Jaejoong a spy but he doesn't seem like one. He's being made used of by ACE?

[yunjaemrcn]

It's getting more interesting. Never would have guess Jaejoong is a spy

[kazemomo]

The Last documents that yunho was reading, all points to jae as being the person inside, the person smart enough to get to yunho, to find out yunho's identity, and/or is the spy. Maybe jae is the spy or maybe he's the core into finding out who.

I'm so curious who A.C.E. is. What does the initials mean? How smart is he or even her?

There was a time skip there. I wonder what happened in between then. What happened to yoochun? How did he survive? Did someone rescue him? What did he do to get the information? How about yunjae's relatiinship? What were the ups and downs? How much did they change?

I'm fine with the time skip, it is a bit confusing when it ended abruotly like that and it was several weeks later. Maybe something to show that it breaks into the next scene? Can you add some tidbits of what happened in those weeks for yoochun and yunjae?

I think the story is still interesting so far. New and interesting things about the charaacters keeps popping up.