Fanfiction: Cardboard Cups - Part III

[summonersanctum]

Fanfiction: Cardboard Cups - Part III
Synopsis: Fuji's a barista at a tiny coffee shop. Tezuka is worker at an architectural firm. By chance or misfortune, luck or some chaotic scheme against them both, they meet.
Genre: Slice of Life/Cafe Story
Rating: PG-13 (maybe higher later)
Word Count: 3169
Warnings: None in this chapter
Dedication: cleverlilwill, my

Comments

[cleverlilwill]

>>;; I was totally half-dead and passing out last night. *sharpens knives*

Damn. Must run off to class.
... SPOT.

[summonersanctum]

Awww, I know you were falling asleep. that's the best time to play "Did Willow notice this"

I hope it was a good sleep too and you've got your spot! *zooms away*

[cleverlilwill]

Tezuka Kunimitsu, RA in Chief.

This made me drool a bit. Man, you're doing something right if a mere sign can make me do that. Or maybe it's my over active imagination to blame...

Sakuno. She was cute in this. *pets her*

ATOBE BURNED THE SHIRT. AHHH! HOW COULD HE? ;~;

Pink faced!Fuji is a wonderful image to reflect on. hehe. Nice going, Tezuka. You definitely deserve WIN moments. <3

[thelovelight]

Will, I think you have a thing for men with titles and glasses. It's generally a combination of the two~

Sakuno exists as a ball of cute. Now she's Tezuka's interior designer and unofficial secretary and still a ball of cute ♥

Atobe was jealous it was more purple than he was. And he didn't burn it~ He didn't do it himself! He had it burned. :3

You know, it was only after I'd edited this chapter for the fourth time that I realized Tezuka walked into Timeless, licked Fuji('s finger), and walked out. I then promptly giggled. u.u

[kuro_wolf]

OOoohhh!!!!
I just read chapter 2 and then this!
Oooohhh!!!
I really really like the progression of their relationship! Plus i have a thing for coffee shop settings, even bakeries. Its my fav setting for my fav pairings!
Hehehehe (^0^)
About Atobe's company name, the first thing that came to my mind was koori no emperor. hehehe, "The Ice Emperor" hehehe or "The Imperial" hehehe
I dunno dude ;P

[summonersanctum]

Bakeries and coffee shops are so much fun to write about~ I'm glad you like it too!

ahahahaha, koori no emperor... I have a thing for Kato Kazuki, so of course all I hear is him singing the song with Hyoutei.

Whatever Atobe's company name will be, I'm sure it'll be regal u.u

Thanks a lot and thanks for reading! ♥

[tsundelenxkaho]

Awww...a sweeet chapter >////<

Like it soooo muuuuch...

I'm dead

G-Good chapter...d-do update...

gotta back to my dreamland

[thelovelight]

Awww, I'm glad you did. An update should be coming soon enough :3

Sleep well, lovie. Thank you for reading ♥

[silverhood]

[Fuji looked up and stood straight, carefully making his way to Tezuka. His playful smile had melted into sincerity.

“Walk to the trains with me?”]

So Fuji was actually waiting for Tezuka till he got off work after midnight? D: Wow. And someone's getting bold! Offering nutella with your finger? TSK Fuji! Pink-faced Fuji afterwards is good. lol :D

Why is Atobe so interested in Tezuka's love life? lol, oooh I hope Tezuka gets to eat the crepe next time!

[thelovelight]

Mmmhmmm... D: It was a long wait but it was worth it, hm?

Fuji's boldness is definitely growing. And Fuji's pinkness was the reaction of Tezuka's boldness in a way, now that I think about it. Both of them are kind of bold, lol.

I think it's because Atobe has that "I prob in your life because I care" attitude. Tezuka just doesn't like the probing part. ^^;

We'll see if he does!

Thanks for reading! ♥

[tacuma811]

I don't have much time to read your fic, since I'm on vacation, but I just finished part two. Why am I not reviewing there? I dunnow XD But I loved it. I hope I can read part 3 now, but I just wanted to say that I LOVE the song of Muse you used in the beginning!

[thelovelight]

Awwwwwww, bb! I'm flattered! ♥ But do enjoy your vacation!

Muse has been one of my favorite bands since, oh... early high school. For this chappie, it just fit and because I love it too, I stuck it in there ^^;;

Now go have fun! Thank you for reading!

[tacuma811]

I'm enjoying my vacation! Thank you!
I finally read the third chapter and it's sooooo awesome! I totally love it! Nutella is the best, no, chocolate is the best XD Definitely! The love in this chap was truly the best!

I like this song of Muse and some others, but I'm not a big fan. Probably because I don't have any of their CD's XD;;

[thelovelight]

Coming from someone that generally doesn't like chocolate, I must agree with your first statement: Nutella is the best~

About five years ago, someone on LJ uploaded all of her Muse CDs for me because I mentioned I liked 'Butterflies and Hurricanes'. Unfortunately, since then, my computer crashed taking away all of my Muse. Still, youtube's helpful when I need it ^^;;

Glad you're enjoying your vacation (and this fic!) Thank you for reading! ♥