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Remember When (Chapters 44-45)

Oct 09, 2012 17:42

Title: Remember When
Author: sunalsosets
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 3,474
Pairings: Luke/Noah, Luke/Reid, Noah/OMC
Previous Chapters: Chapters 42-43
Disclaimer: Just for fun, not for profit.
Author's Note: Okay folks, this is the penultimate chapter. I worked really hard to get this completed (had to edit and tweak some stuff) early in the day because today is my ( Read more... )

Comments 22

sln188 October 10 2012, 01:03:57 UTC

Now that's what I'm talking about!! Wanted some bells and whistles for Nuke's getting back together and you rang some here (dating, NY together, proposal). Thanks. Nice closure for Adam and appropriate for R. Looking forward to the rest but really don't want it to end.

sunalsosets October 11 2012, 22:16:14 UTC

Thanks for reading.

seajellybaby October 10 2012, 07:01:07 UTC

Now this chapter was very well written and nicely constructed. You easily show us how these are no longer the boys we once knew, but two matured men who know how to properly deal with adult feelings.

I did feel a little bad for Reid at the end... Since it seems he's lost some of his ooph...

Love how you're writing this!

sunalsosets October 11 2012, 22:17:09 UTC

Thanks for reading and yeah, that's one way to describe Reid's return. There's definitely some regret on his part but trust me, he's still Reid.

jeri_1116 October 10 2012, 13:59:19 UTC

Yo! Did Luke really just slam the door in his face like that? Damn! Straight cold! Straight cold! And from what you wrote, he looked awful.

Noah's goodbye with Adam was perfect and so very sweet.

Great chapter!

sunalsosets October 11 2012, 22:21:55 UTC

Yo! Did Luke really just slam the door in his face like that? Damn! Straight cold! Straight cold! And from what you wrote, he looked awful.

This totally made me laugh out loud. Thanks for reading.

valenti1965 October 10 2012, 21:43:42 UTC

Oh I am so going to miss this wonderful story when it ends :-(

Omg..did Luke really just shut the door on Reid?!? Hope he doesn't knock again lol

Loved Noah going to see Adam at the airport..it seemed a very fitting considering their past relationship.

Loved them taking it slow..then not..and I love Noah proposing to Luke..Yay!!!

Great chapter!!! Can't wait to see if Reid fights for Luke in next one..or he is...as Adam is..history! xxx

sunalsosets October 12 2012, 03:35:25 UTC

Thanks for reading and I agree about Adam and Noah's goodbye at the airport being a fitting end to their relationship.

wheelie47 October 11 2012, 17:58:11 UTC

Excellent update!

They have both matured so much, especially Luke when he told Noah to say goodbye to Adam in person.

Such a hearybreaking scene at the airport.I really do wish Adam well... He's such a good guy.

And yay for them getting married. Hope Reid hasn't shown up to throw a spanner in the works.

sunalsosets October 12 2012, 03:38:43 UTC

Thanks for reading.