Drabble #3

Feb 19, 2012 02:03

Title: The Fight
Author:sunalsosets
Rating: PG
Word Count: 2,221
Pairings: Luke/Noah
Summary: Luke and Noah have a fight that leads to a discussion of something deeper.
Comments: I don't know if this qualifies as a drabble considering it's over 2,000 words but there you have it. Also, I have no clue how it ended up being this long.

The Fight

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boriqua522 February 21 2012, 03:56:27 UTC
awwww...that was so great. loved insecure noah, and a bit surprised at a very alive reid. loved the sweet ending. you said so much with just a few words.

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sunalsosets February 21 2012, 04:27:04 UTC

a bit surprised at a very alive reid

lmao...I don't know why but for some reason that really made me laugh out loud. Thanks for all the nice comments guys.

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freakykat February 21 2012, 06:46:01 UTC
I have some serious love for this story. Your voices were spot on and the ending was lovely but what I liked the most is that you did what the show never would... their was talking and stuff, lol. Emotions and fears and so on. That's hands down my favorite part of this.

<3

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seajellybaby August 3 2012, 08:26:29 UTC
Gah!!! Really emotional and beautiful!

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ext_5493173 October 27 2020, 00:38:53 UTC
Great job. I always liked on the show when they had non plot driven stuff, just talking and being in their own world...youve captured that perfectly...
Btw, i wouldnt have minded Reid being alive...as long as hes nowhere near Luke....Luke belongs elsewhere.

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