Gift fic for Kinky Kneazle!

Jul 16, 2007 11:04

TO: kinky_kneazle
FROM: ANONYMOUS
TITLE: What to Expect
PAIRING: Remus/Lucius
RATING: NC-17
SUMMARY: During the First War, what is supposed to be a simple spying mission turns into something Remus never expected.
WARNINGS: Hints of BDSM activity. Rather more porn than plot.
DISCLAIMER: Remus, Lucius and everything else belong to JK Rowling.
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kinky_kneazle July 17 2007, 13:33:15 UTC
Wow! Thank you so much! I love the darkness of it. Your Remus is spot on - his voice is just how I would imagine it. And I loved the twist at the start where I thought he was spying but he was really planning to see Lucius.

I especially love this line: Lucius tangles his fingers in Remus' hair, clinging to hair cropped a little too short to cling to properly.

The ending was bittersweet. Sad. I can feel the anguish Remus would be feeling over the way he betrayed his friends. It was a wonderful present - thank you again.

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anonymous September 7 2007, 03:45:21 UTC
Agh. This was amazingly hot, especially the "ride it" comment. And very well-written, as well. Those two combined make the best erotica. :)
-a reader of slash

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