Gift fic for Graceland428!

[tarie]

TO: graceland428
FROM: ANONYMOUS
TITLE: Counting Flowers
PAIRING: Ron/Remus
RATING: NC-17
EXCERPT: Remus shut his eyes, and breathed deeply. Lord, forgive me for what I am about to do.

"I'm sorry, Professor," Ron blurted as Remus leaned closer. "I'm sorry, I shouldn't have, I

Comments

[lookfar]

Oh, wow. This is perfect. I love premature!Ron and the emotional content and the sadness and regret of the backstory. Lovely.

[graceland428]

Sorry it's taken me so long to respond to this!

I love your Ron, and the way Remus compares him to Sirius--I've always thought they had similarities that people don't usually explore--and the interaction between Ron and Remus was really quite sweet. I like Remus as well-intentioned (but not necessarily successful); he wants to help but can't quite help himself.

This fic has a beautiful realism to it, which I always like--I hate sex to be too perfect. This is deliciously awkward.

Thank you so much! I really, really enjoyed this. :)

[bonfoi]

This is the first time I've read Remus/Ron and it hurts and it's raw, and this was amazing.