I love that you twist the fanon cliche of seamus being the one to want.
I love the phonetic diction as well, it adds to it, bringing Seamus just that much further alive. I also love the dirty talk and want to demand more, please, and if you could slip in a wee bit of Irish, I think I would love you forever and ever.
Dean wanking on Seamus's bed and the cigarettes (and I'm a militant anti-smoker, too) was just hot hot hot as it reminds me of those pictures of Devon smoking outside his trailer on set and seemed even more real and alive.
The description of the clothing - seamus in dean's shorts - gah, dead.
A wonderful job, mystery author! I truly hope you write more Deamus and that I can track you down later to read it!
I have no IDEA why people think that Seamus is the one who wants... But it does always end up that way.
I'm really glad you liked the diction. I was SO worried about it because I've never delt with a character that their accent held so strongly with their character. I'm glad you thought I did it right. As for the Irish, I KNOW! I wanted to put it in... But unfortunately I was pressed for time and was worried it I just slipped it in there it would seem unnatural. Maybe when I post this to my journal I'll change it.
Oooo. I know, the smoking.... it's just hot. I know.
Anyway, I'm super happy you enjoyed this. Your comment makes me want to write more Deamus.
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I was so worried about my Seamus.
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I love the phonetic diction as well, it adds to it, bringing Seamus just that much further alive. I also love the dirty talk and want to demand more, please, and if you could slip in a wee bit of Irish, I think I would love you forever and ever.
Dean wanking on Seamus's bed and the cigarettes (and I'm a militant anti-smoker, too) was just hot hot hot as it reminds me of those pictures of Devon smoking outside his trailer on set and seemed even more real and alive.
The description of the clothing - seamus in dean's shorts - gah, dead.
A wonderful job, mystery author! I truly hope you write more Deamus and that I can track you down later to read it!
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I'm really glad you liked the diction. I was SO worried about it because I've never delt with a character that their accent held so strongly with their character. I'm glad you thought I did it right.
As for the Irish, I KNOW! I wanted to put it in... But unfortunately I was pressed for time and was worried it I just slipped it in there it would seem unnatural. Maybe when I post this to my journal I'll change it.
Oooo. I know, the smoking.... it's just hot. I know.
Anyway, I'm super happy you enjoyed this. Your comment makes me want to write more Deamus.
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Well I'll just fix it when I post it to my journal.
Thanks a lot for commenting, I'm glad you liked the style.
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